--Elite Writer Alias: beth freese Name: Beth ? ASL: 18.F.Earth Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 3911 Life Story: life is for squares [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: 0 Forum Posts: 1 Shoutbox Posts: 2 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 5210 D 14.27 Years 1.43 Decades 173.67 Months 744.29 Weeks 5.210000e+8 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: "the practice of art isn't to make a living, its to make your soul grow" -Kurt Vonnegut
i haven't been on here for a long time. i should submit some of my new stuff. i'm not sure i can though i have to give a bunch of people comments first i think. we'll see. well that's all. thanks for listening.
I see that you are an argumentative person seeking an abusive verbal fight. I am sorry that you read my poem, with such a negative attitude, to begin with. You do not have to read any of poetry in the future. You have been
Unfortunately, my poem titled:Love is Simple did not satisfy your intellectual curiosity. I am disappointed with your breakdown of poem. You made things more complicated by over analyzing poem. I always leave it to the reader for his or her interpretation. I do not make road maps for readers to follow specific meaning of poem. We all have different taste and opinions. Please take poem and rewrite it and post it on line for review. If you can show these concrete examples that you are suggesting,then other readers would be more satisfied. I am completely satisfied with this poem.
I also forgot to mention, the reason "Love Lost" might seem so unoriginal is because I also have my "Beautiful Stranger" trilogy that is along the same lines... This person definitely inspires me to write! Maybe if you get a chance to look at them sometime, you could tell me what you think? I'd greatly appreciate it! Thanks