--Elite Writer Alias: bigohhh1 Name: John Olenski ASL: 31/M/Fl Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 38 Life Story: [ Ignore User ]
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John, Many thanks for your kind comments and your observation. My spelling and grammer are not as good as they should be. But the matter is in hand.
The poem was written when I was emerging from a serious bout of depression so I can empathise with you there. This went straight from my head to paper, with no alterations.
But thank you again its great to get such honest feedback on my work
Thank you for coming by, and thank you for your comments on "Rest Little Angel"! It is meant to be a "beddie bye" bedtime nursery rhyme for all little Angels.
Thanks a lot for your comment there bigohh1, appreciated.......... perhaps "yet" is too short and harsh..... you do tend to bounce off it when you read it..... thanks again col13x
Thank you, I'm greatly flattered thats you've spent the last few days reading my poetry, the years between some of them are great and some aren't very good at all but I'm glad you like "smile for me"
Thank you. It was my very first personally poem I ever have done. It was inspired by my family. You have so far been the only one who has commented and my friend told me about this site. At first I was afraid to get my first comment to be bad. Thank you for a positive one.
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