Thank you very much for your suggestions I will give you credit for the help and if you want feel free to read and comment on my other poems. If you'd like i'd return the favor if you wish. Thanks again.
Thankyou so much for your comment on "It Still Hurts." It is actually true, but without pain there would be no insight on what to expect from certain things in the future. At least, that's what I keep telling myself.