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    --Elite Writer
    Alias: black_beauty18
    Name: Melissa VanWey
    ASL: 25/Female/Hutchinson, KS
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    Featured: Beautiful Stranger (pt. 1)

     Russian Roulette
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    ::Angry : Class : Poetry :
     Black Magic
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    ::Passion : Class : Poetry :
     Rape
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     The Dopeman
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    ::Legend : Class : Poetry :
     Trials and Tribulations
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     Ungrateful
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     Untitled
    :|| V: 712 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Love : Class : Poetry :
     My Heart's Tale
    :|| V: 718 | C: 1 ||:
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     Winter Wasteland
    :|| V: 671 | C: 4 ||:
    ::Nature : Class : Poetry :
     Love Lost
    :|| V: 1043 | C: 7 ||:
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     An Illusion in the Night
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    ::Depressed : Class : Poetry :
     Forfeit
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     Love or Stupidity?
    :|| V: 679 | C: 2 ||:
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     Loving You
    :|| V: 733 | C: 4 ||:
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     Falling
    :|| V: 738 | C: 6 ||:
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     My Dark Place
    :|| V: 731 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Depressed : Class : Poetry :
     Unworthy
    :|| V: 770 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Depressed : Class : Poetry :
     The World: In a Nutshell
    :|| V: 724 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Serious : Class : Poetry :
     The Plague
    :|| V: 910 | C: 3 ||:
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     My Miracle
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    ~random ray of sunshine~
    | Posted on 2009-04-30 19:26:01 | by latentlylyrical - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Cool

    -Craig
    | Posted on 2009-02-08 20:55:54 | by Raphael - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you Melissa, for the comments on my two poems. I'm really bad at putting punctuation in my poems actually. i just don't care that much. I just write as a release and normally its all done in haste. I don't edit my poems beyond that first initial write so if punctuation isn't placed when i write it, it probably won't be placed ever. haha. But i know what you mean, if i had put some in it would be a better flow and a better meaning. haha. So thanks! I'll try to work on that... but its not a big concern of mine. Though I know it irritates some people.

    And as for Lost Little Girl... I guess that poem wasn't about the changes she made, it was about finding the courage to make those changes. to know that it was ok to do what she needed to do. to know that its ok to break his hold over her. to change, mostly... from that Little Girl to that young woman she was already becoming. I get what you're saying though. Positive writing is not really my thing. Though. Just so you know.

    I'm probably sounding horribly rude... and please trust me when I say that is not my intention. I'm very grateful for your thoughts on my writing. I love when people read and give feedback. So, again thank you!!!!

    have a good day!
    | Posted on 2009-01-07 15:40:40 | by desolateheart - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I tweaked my poems a bit, go check them out if you'd like and let me know what you think. Hope you enjoy!
    | Posted on 2009-01-06 03:10:01 | by Realitywarp87 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for your critique on my Immortal Love poem...yeah I'm not feeling the "thee" myself so I'll see if I can change it somehow. Glad that you liked it though I'm always happy when someone is moved by my writings :)
    Also on the Aufrey Hepburn one I'll come up with more...I wouldn't mind writing more on the best actress ever!
    | Posted on 2009-01-05 16:11:13 | by Realitywarp87 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    LoL of course not! share it as much as you want! I'm so glad that you liked my poem haha!
    | Posted on 2009-01-04 21:34:52 | by Celeste J. Bell - [ Reply to This ] -



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