--Elite Writer Alias: blu_kittin Name: Cat Blu ASL: 20/F/Garden of Eden Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 2857 Life Story: Work in Progress [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: 19 Forum Posts: 0 Shoutbox Posts: 0 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 4502 D 12.33 Years 1.23 Decades 150.07 Months 643.14 Weeks 4.502000e+8 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: "We are all just prisoners here, of our own device"-Hotel California, The Eagles
Journal: No Surrender -------------------------------------------
Mood: At War
There is no right answer to a question asked at 2 a.m.
There is something so wrong about dangling hope in front of someone like a carrot to a horse, and then ripping it away in the heart of the night.
I refuse to surrender/My soul is not mine to give, and my words are more a part of me than a mother with her child.
Cat, thank you for coming by, and for your comments on "Against The Desert Sand". I always feel a deep sense of gratitude for the sacrifice, pain, and loss that our service men and women endure to support and represent the US.
Thanks for your comment on "Innocence once was." I am so very glad that you liked it. Yes, the first line is a little rough because initially it read like this:
This dry, barren land too
Was once alive...
And since I reworked the poem I had to put these two verses into one, which may not have worked out too well. I'd appreciate any suggestion you may have for fixing it. Thanks again for the comment. This poem is a piece of my life.