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Name: Nichole N
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Hi to everyone! Today is a snowy, half sunny half cloudy day and its beautiful! Snowman anyone? :)


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A cinquain is a French style of poetry much like the haiku. The syllable requirement looks like this:
2
4
6
8
2

Anyways, thank you for reading my poem, my dear. As always, your comments are appreciated. :)

Take Care,
Starless
| Posted on 2007-05-23 06:03:00 | by Starless Knight - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Thanks so much for your time reading and commenting on Treasured Pathway. I wrote it several years ago for a close friend. Many, many years in the past, she and I hung out with some of the same bunch of guys, however we didn't know each other that well, and to tell you the truth, I didn't like her very well. So, from that point time passed, friends came and went, etc. Somehow, we had another mutual friend that caused us to hand together again. I was so wrong about her. She's one of the most genuine friends I've ever had. I guess a short summary of that story would help the reader to understand more why the poem goes where it does. I really appreciate your insight, though, because I see how I might need to go back and add to or reword the latter part of the piece, so that the reader might not be left with the feeling of uncertainty.

- psycho therapist
| Posted on 2007-05-22 22:12:28 | by psychotherapist - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Okay, okay, I was just checking. Take your time and all, I'm pretty busy myself, so I know what you mean. :P
| Posted on 2007-03-24 07:46:46 | by Darkess - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Hey again... Remember me?
| Posted on 2007-03-23 15:36:03 | by Darkess - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Thanks for your comments on "98.0". Regardless of what meaning I meant when writing anything, it's easy to see that each reader may see things a different way. The picture I picked because it's sunrise - so near you can enjoy it and yet (thankfully in that case) far out of reach.

You can see that different people take different meanings from reading the various comments on your own work as well as that of others and I think that's good. Poetry may be written by anyone, but it is ultimately written for the reader as it comes into that individual contemplation.
| Posted on 2007-02-22 09:27:47 | by Blue Monk - [ Reply to This ] -
  
ok I have been in a relationship that was long, and you sounded so very needed in the poem is all, and my life didn't depend on what he was doing, just because you go into a relationship doesn't mean you have to give everything up, and I'm sorry that you dated a bunch of [censored]s that abused you.

~liz~
| Posted on 2007-01-19 19:11:04 | by Fadingperson - [ Reply to This ] -



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