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    Journal: trying to quit
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    Mood: not yet
      
    It's not as easy as putting that pack of cigarettes down and not touching it again, it also requires putting the stress and frustration on a shelf and plowing ahead, I'm doing it one "don't need/want to smoke" at a time, some days I'm good and I have about two or three, other days I'm weak and it's four or five but it's a work in progress...


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    ah I see, that's really interesting, but I myself do not see how it is related to mine, unless I have very different way to present my writing hehe

    Maybe ;p
    | Posted on 2008-07-05 21:20:40 | by KeeperOfLight - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks man I really need to hear that...or read it lol.
    | Posted on 2008-06-07 19:51:55 | by Sparkster - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey thank you for your comment :)

    Whats hiragana? ...lol my english and way of portraying my thoughts is confusing,not many people can keep up with me :P
    Any tips on smoothing it out would be nice
    thank you :)
    | Posted on 2008-06-06 07:14:48 | by KeeperOfLight - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    lol thanks for your comments on "The Lies of The Eyes". Your words really meant alot.
    | Posted on 2008-06-03 20:19:22 | by Sparkster - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    yeah and how much i may or may not agree w/ it, still going to be there, thanks. . . i think , that was cool, oh thanks for comment
    | Posted on 2008-05-30 18:56:10 | by every48seconds - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for taking the time to read my poem David and Bathsheba! The said line 'could' be misinterpreted. But bestiality is not the idea there. Shepherd is the priest or preacher, endowed ewe is the "endowed maid". No pun intended. The use of Shepherd and Ewe is necessitated because that's the way the biblical story went. Thanks again. Quoting the story here for your reference.

    "The rich man had exceedingly many flocks and herds. But the poor man had nothing, except one little ewe lamb which he had bought and nourished; and it grew up together with him and with his children. It ate of his own food and drank from his own cup and lay in his bosom; and it was like a daughter to him. And a traveler came to the rich man, who refused to take from his own flock and from his own herd to prepare one for the wayfaring man who had come to him; but he took the poor man's lamb and prepared it for the man who had come to him."
    | Posted on 2008-05-30 02:36:02 | by kochu - [ Reply to This ] -



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