--Elite Writer Alias: chaos_flame Name: David Robey ASL: 24/m/ky Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 2 Life Story: pain, loss......hope [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: 10 Forum Posts: 0 Shoutbox Posts: 0 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 1434 D 3.93 Years 0.39 Decades 47.8 Months 204.86 Weeks 1.43400e+8 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: Dreams are reality and reality is just a fucked up nightmare
well, dont go on my page..kayla let some rather unpleasant notes on there and i would rather not have trouble so please do not retaliate if u have any respect for me whatsoever. i feel bad...everyone is making life difficult here
You obviously do not welcome all criticism to your work. Thanks for attacking my work though instead of giving honest feedback. You tell me that your writing has depth and all this garbage and then you use sentences like this, and I quote you directly;
"At least my have a little more in depth feeling in a simple."
That is not even a complete sentence. Before you want to attack someone's work you may want to brush up on your spelling and grammar. Just a thought.
well you were on a reading spree.
Ill tell you from where you should have read it to be appropriate
1.beauty in black - my first mode of appretiation to one women.I did not choose her
2. Eyes to embrace - the next women i chose and i really wanted her
3. why? - thoughts
4. A dreaem in my stride - saying good bye to her.
A horrible dream is the first poem i wrote and there is no women at that time.
Sorrow in a day is short i agree and its just thoughts of someone i want to become true and your are exactly right about the poem.
Thanks for the comments but check out the essence in all of em and then please do tell me about the whole scenario that i call life i am living about....Its actually fun to hear comments
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