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Journal: -------------------------------------------Mood: The Usual    ...Created 2020-10-15 15:34:10     [ View Past Journals ] [ View as Blog ]

Last 20 Submissions  conscience decisions :|| V: 9 | C: 1 ||: ::Serious : Class : Poetry :  eating paper :|| V: 3 | C: 0 ||: ::Passion : Class : Poetry :  industry pressures :|| V: 3 | C: 1 ||: ::Serious : Class : Poetry :  a realization :|| V: 21 | C: 1 ||: ::Longing : Class : Poetry :  computational explosion :|| V: 20 | C: 0 ||: ::Legend : Class : Deep Thought :  psychotic conversations :|| V: 23 | C: 0 ||: ::Love : Class : Lyrics :  a fools paradise :|| V: 22 | C: 0 ||: ::Mirror or Mask : Class : Poetry :  ellie :|| V: 23 | C: 0 ||: ::Passion : Class : Poetry :  Fear Of Commitment Or Falling Forever :|| V: 24 | C: 0 ||: ::Serious : Class : Poetry :  billie :|| V: 23 | C: 0 ||: ::Longing : Class : Poetry :  the logic virus :|| V: 39 | C: 1 ||: ::Serious : Class : Poetry :  between you and me :|| V: 43 | C: 1 ||: ::Serious : Class : Story :  breaking points and getting bent :|| V: 39 | C: 0 ||: ::Serious : Class : Story :  corporate performance :|| V: 43 | C: 1 ||: ::Serious : Class : Story :  burnt out :|| V: 52 | C: 0 ||: ::BrokenHeart : Class : Poetry :  heaven is the high that no one knows :|| V: 37 | C: 1 ||: ::Depressed : Class : Lyrics :  confession :|| V: 70 | C: 0 ||: ::Longing : Class : Poetry :  untitled song :|| V: 70 | C: 0 ||: ::Longing : Class : Lyrics :  differences of opinion :|| V: 69 | C: 0 ||: ::Serious : Class : Poetry :  Duality...Thought-submission :|| V: 70 | C: 0 ||: ::Serious : Class : Poetry :

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You've really put out a lot of poems back to back! That is inspiring, I need to get off my ass and do something creative again. I look forward to reading some more as I can steal the time. Thanks!

| Posted on 2020-10-09 19:36:59 | by Blue Monk - [ Reply to This ] -

Hey I was glad to take the time to read it, my friend. It was an excellent piece and I totally understand what you mean, true art just flows out of you and it's hard to control. Sometimes we need someone on the outside looking in to give us the structure/criticism the piece needs to become truly great. I have had decent pieces that have turned to gold because of others' input. The format I restructured the piece with comes from my love of music, the spacing adds a bit more depth and pronounces the heavy hitters of the lines. Kind of like a beat. Badadada dadada dada... da! Anyways, keep churning out those thoughts/feelings, I love to read em! -eggshells

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