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    Journal:
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    Mood: The Usual
      
    in your spiritual well
    you sing heaven and hell
    when only time will tell
    who stood or who fell

    god exists in what dimension
    even a man with poor education
    can ask the right questions
    but what is worth it to mention

    directions point north
    but a compass can be broken
    can you really be so sure
    beliefs preach in polar opposites

    fuck your great divides
    we are divine on both sides
    being lit by human lights
    with varying degrees of sight


    ...Created 2020-12-04 00:03:27     [ View Past Journals ]

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     negotiations with a psychotic mind
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    ::Longing : Class : Poetry :
     poet
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    ::Mirror or Mask : Class : Poetry :
     truth be told
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    ::Depressed : Class : Poetry :
     winning at a loss for words
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    ::Love : Class : Lyrics :
     only if hell has frozen over
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    ::Serious : Class : Poetry :
     unfinished song
    :|| V: 243 | C: 0 ||:
    ::Serious : Class : Lyrics :
     be hind the seens
    :|| V: 230 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Satire : Class : Poetry :
     the crossroads of truth and delusion
    :|| V: 247 | C: 1 ||:
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     an act of betrayal
    :|| V: 227 | C: 1 ||:
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     tired routine
    :|| V: 179 | C: 1 ||:
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     conscience decisions
    :|| V: 210 | C: 2 ||:
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     eating paper
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    ::Passion : Class : Poetry :
     industry pressures
    :|| V: 181 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Serious : Class : Poetry :
     a realization
    :|| V: 212 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Longing : Class : Poetry :
     computational explosion
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    ::Legend : Class : Deep Thought :
     psychotic conversations
    :|| V: 190 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Love : Class : Lyrics :
     a fools paradise
    :|| V: 301 | C: 0 ||:
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     Fear Of Commitment Or Falling Forever
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     the logic virus
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     between you and me
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    Thank you for the comment on Blink. I appreciate your appreciation. ;)

    Lloyd
    | Posted on 2021-01-28 02:37:39 | by Blue Monk - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Good morning! Today is my birthday which means I have survived yet another full orbit of Sol. Thank you for the comment on my recent effort. As to whether it is "finished?" I'm increasingly prone to let the various readers complete whatever thoughts may come to mind if not comments thereto. Poetry can easily become, "This is the song that never ends" if you're a Lambchop/Shari Lewis fan you'll understand the reference. Let's hope there are more and better poems from Lloyd in the future. Merry Christmas!

    Blue Monk

    P.S. Nice journal entry.
    | Posted on 2020-12-21 14:09:40 | by Blue Monk - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Good morning! Well, I posted a poem, perhaps it is still a WIP who knows? I have yet to complete the poem I started as mentioned on my journal entry... it awaits.

    Thanks for staying in touch.

    Lloyd AKA Blue Monk
    | Posted on 2020-12-16 12:59:49 | by Blue Monk - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the comment on Guinness. As a favor to my sister, I located and bought a case of the new Yuengling Hershey's chocolate Porter. I ended up keeping a couple six packs and gave three bottles to friends.

    I like dark beers but usually those towards the Guinness Extra Stout or a strong double bock, bitter and around 8%. I also like the Dirty Bastard Scottish style Ale also around 8%, but I'd now have to drive 80 miles or so to find it.

    The Yuengling Porter, even with the chocolate, is a bit too mild for me. I've found if I add a pour of bourbon it becomes more drinkable. ;) Cheers!
    | Posted on 2020-11-09 02:19:11 | by Blue Monk - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    You've really put out a lot of poems back to back! That is inspiring, I need to get off my ass and do something creative again. I look forward to reading some more as I can steal the time. Thanks!
    | Posted on 2020-10-09 19:36:59 | by Blue Monk - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey I was glad to take the time to read it, my friend. It was an excellent piece and I totally understand what you mean, true art just flows out of you and it's hard to control. Sometimes we need someone on the outside looking in to give us the structure/criticism the piece needs to become truly great. I have had decent pieces that have turned to gold because of others' input. The format I restructured the piece with comes from my love of music, the spacing adds a bit more depth and pronounces the heavy hitters of the lines. Kind of like a beat. Badadada dadada dada... da! Anyways, keep churning out those thoughts/feelings, I love to read em!

    -eggshells
    | Posted on 2020-08-24 13:31:40 | by eggshells - [ Reply to This ] -



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