--Elite Writer Alias: crazyphreshone Name: synyster shadows ASL: 32/M/NewYork Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 24 Life Story: sanity is overated [ Ignore User ]
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you got it spot on! the idea is to paint a panoramic with words while simultaniously forcing the reader to search the work and themselves for a deeper meaning! what can i say? you rock!
thank you much and i am glad you figured that out and also do it yourself.
take care
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Thankyou for your comment on A Writer. Im glad you enjoyed it. Im normaly not a personal writer but i guess i had nowhere to turn for inspiration for this one. Thanks
yeah, of the two of us, i'd hafta say he is the more devoted one. i lived with him when i was 15, and he was 19. then my parents made me move back in with them. i tossed him aside for another guy who i married, when the marraige dissolved, i moved in with another guy. then i left the other guy and ran into Juju at the club. 20 years had passed. and he said, "you know, i've waited 20 years for you to come back to me. i still intend to marry you...".
thanks for your comment on my clusterf**k poem....yeah it was a rant. i wrote it as a reply to someone during a theological debate and also as a reply to males in general in regards to the exclusion of women from thier spiritual hierarchy. most of my work is rather heavy handed on emotion. i tend to compartmentalise a whole hell of alot...lol