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Hi thanks so much for your very kind comment on "Love's Lesson". I am glad you took the time to read it eventhough it is long...I was just pouring out my feelings and before I knew it the poem was quite long. Yes that is me in the picture and thank you for the compliment.
I know this isn't my work, I forgot to phrase that in the description. I've been submitting all kids of things and forgot to post it. Thanks oh so much for drawing it to my attention. Don't want to be accused of plagerizing(hope i spelt that right, oh well). Will change it ASAP! Dominique
thanks for the comment. yes, it would be hard to understand unless you were in my head. i guess, the point of the piece is that for some reason, i felt that "feminists" were that way because they had never known love. mind you, i've never been anti-feminist or anything...just never quite understood the real extreme ones (not that i do now). but, the beginning part of the poem is saying i wish i had listened, i wish i could have understood what it meant to be strong and independent. and the middle to end is about how i came to these conclusions--being pretty badly hurt myself. and, this wasn't the first time...but it was the big heartbreak of my life (thus far). anyway, now i can find appreciation in other women and trying to be whole all by myself--not finding myself complete in a man. so, yeah. that's it. just wanted to explain the concept clearer. although, i'm not sure that i did. i will be working on it more! thanks for commenting and, errr...sorry this is so long.
I think Shattered Inspiration is finished. :) My thoughts just end when everything flows over into my reality. I've got some major blockage going on right now though it's driving me nuts. LOL....so I'm hoping if I just stop thinking so much it'll start flowing again like it did before. I have a couple of others that I really want to add to as well...and I can't seem to take the picture from my head and put it in words. I'm totally flattered that you checked back in on it though. Thanks!