Name: Caleb Hines
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"They say if you play a Microsoft CD backwards, it plays Satanic messages. That's nothing, because if you play it forwards, it installs Windows." --Azuire
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LOL. About growing old.
|| Posted on 2008-02-15 09:28:09 | by Maverique - [ Reply to This ] -|
Thanks for the suggestions, i'll fix it up, ^_^
|| Posted on 2007-11-30 17:56:29 | by WhY-dO-yOu-CrY - [ Reply to This ] -|
Thanks a lot for the obviously well thought out and helpful insights on my piece "Erasable Colours" You were right on most of the things you said. I did iron it out and I was wondering, if you don't mind my asking so, to have a look at it. You said something about my having misplaced a sentence and wanted to know if you had any further suggestions on that account. The lines in question were the following:
As the sun does
But is instantly,
and rather consciously,
As one passes by.
Now it read:
"As the sun does
But is instantly
As one passes by"
Is it ok? Does it still sound awkward?
|| Posted on 2007-11-10 12:25:38 | by Ethan Brody - [ Reply to This ] -|
Thank you for the wonderfully well thought out analyzation of my poem. That's the first time anybody has been so straight-forward on my writing. I feel that this type of reviewing is necessary for growth. You left some very good points that will help me improve this poem and my future poems.
|| Posted on 2007-11-07 14:02:08 | by Indelible_ink - [ Reply to This ] -|
I'm not sure if I should laugh or cry that you counted it down to the day. I think it's cool though, that you didn't forget about me. And thanks.
|| Posted on 2007-11-07 13:53:31 | by blu_kittin - [ Reply to This ] -|
Actually, I lost my mind years ago as well. But now I've lost even more of it.
|| Posted on 2007-11-05 19:05:39 | by AsiaticFox - [ Reply to This ] -|