--Elite Writer Alias: dannyshyboy Name: danny rivera ASL: 23/m/fl Website:[ Education ] Blog:[ Blog ] Days Away: 84 Life Story: nothing exciting [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: 7 Forum Posts: 1 Shoutbox Posts: 0 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 1834 D 5.02 Years 0.5 Decades 61.13 Months 262 Weeks 1.834000e+8 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: the mind is like a parachute, it wont operate unless its open (i reworded this from the original saying which i completely forgot)
hey y'all i havent been on here for a really, really long time. this is my return hehehe!!
i cant beleive im awake right now, ive been awake for-ever.
& i luv new friends so if u have myspace u can add me, i have poetry on there as well u can read and feel free to criticize or whatever.
heres the link:
Hey man, I apparechiate the comment on above my head, and yes towards the end it was a rest. A quick desire to rest from all of the stress to the world that we live in. You know when you just get those certain days where you want to just give up or give into, and just sleep, awake like nothing ever had happened. That kinda rest.
Thanks for the double whammy favor dude. I rather think you'll regret it soon - I'm not the type for fluffiness.
But yeah.
And I apologize about befuddling you, that wasn't the intention of the poem at all.. I can promise you that. I'm glad you kept an open mind to learning though, as that is always a super plus in life (or so they say).
I finally made my mind up. I want to be an EMT. And I’m very excited. Not only about being an EMT but also because I finally made my mind up! Yay me.
Lol it doesn’t sound ridiculous, I know exactly what you mean, reading something from someone halfway across the world, and knowing that they feel the same way and can relate, it’s understandable! Though looking up at your asl, it shows that you’re in Florida as well. How odd!
Sorry it took me awhile to comment back, I haven’t been around a computer in a few days! My boyfriend is gonna give me another swimming lesson later today, and I’m nervous but excited. I don’t know how to explain it, but so many people have tried to teach me, and I just look at him and know that I can learn with him right there by my side. It’s a wonderful feeling! Anyway, I’m gonna stop babbling on (lol reminds me of that song Babylon), and i guess get on with my day! peace and inspiration!
Duv
o.y. Link for the song i mentioned! I hope you enjoy!
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Your welcome for the comment on your poem, and as for the funeral home, I guess people look at you diffrent for working at one, but that kind of work pays, and if you were to scroll through more of my writing I am a bit odd to be working there myself, but I just find it a bit perfect to work there ya know.
It is good and all, working with this facination of death, and then just turning back here to es to write about it, matieral, material, material. More fuel for that writting, not really,
Thanks Dan on your comment to my recent poem. Yes the reason behind the poem, is just a description of watching the past of human remains. Its very sorrowful, and I should watch out for my typos, so that was much appereciated. I see myself writing more darker poetry since I work inside of a funeral home, some of the things need to vent off into pen 'pon paper. If you know what I mean.
Thank you for your comment on Nevertheless! And making my day as well. Just feeling a bit queasy, as I just came back from a college interview, I'm supposed to start classes on the 29th (and I just talked to them today!), but I'm not really sure if right now is quite right to start, I think I might wait til the next semester and I'm nervous about telling them that I wasted their time. eekies! But yes. Back to the matter at hand! Aww d@mn, now my thoughts are all scattered, (and now i feel like i'm writing an essay): in conclusion, I both enjoyed and appreciated your comment, and I look forward to commenting on you in the future! *quietly chuckles* Anyhoo. guess it's on with my day, maybe these butterflies will go away! Peace and inspiration!
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