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    Journal: Bye for a while
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    Mood: Thinking...
      
    I'm going to be away for a while, probably for the rest of the summer, i don't know. i'm just going to write this story i've been thinking about writing for over a year now. So, i'll take off a month or so, and i'll be back.


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     Mommy Hates Me (redone)
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    ::Being a Teen : Class : Lyrics :
     Soccer Ball
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    ::BrokenHeart : Class : Lyrics :
     Just Wanna Do You
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    ::Longing : Class : Lyrics :
     5 a.m.
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    ::Love : Class : Lyrics :
     Mommy Hates Me
    :|| V: 33 | C: 0 ||:
    ::Being a Teen : Class : Lyrics :
     Kissed By An Angel
    :|| V: 33 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Depressed : Class : Lyrics :
     Trapped
    :|| V: 37 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Being a Teen : Class : Lyrics :
     A Soldier Stole My Heart
    :|| V: 60 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Love : Class : Lyrics :
     All Alone
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    ::Depressed : Class : Lyrics :
     Featured workNot Giving Up
    :|| V: 31 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Being a Teen : Class : Poetry :
     When I Leave
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    ::BrokenHeart : Class : Lyrics :
     Without You
    :|| V: 53 | C: 1 ||:
    ::BrokenHeart : Class : Lyrics :
     Heartbroken's Diary (Pentagon)
    :|| V: 45 | C: 1 ||:
    ::BrokenHeart : Class : Poetry :
     My Good Friend
    :|| V: 41 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Love : Class : Poetry :
     Chapter 9
    :|| V: 33 | C: 0 ||:
    ::Serious : Class : Prose :
     Chapter 8
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     Chapter 7
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     Chapter 7
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     Chapter 6
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     Till It's Gone
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    You suck missy
    | Posted on 2008-07-14 14:17:17 | by shadow of death - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    schools already over for you, WTF
    | Posted on 2008-05-30 13:54:41 | by cor - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    hey thwnks for commenting on my knife and me. alot of people dont understand how a knife could be so important but it can make u feel safe and its your life your holding in your hands. u can end it any time you want. with a knife ur in control of what happens. then alot of people just think that ima freak that wants to kill myself. im glad u understand. thanks again.

    sweet-fire
    | Posted on 2008-05-21 19:24:11 | by sweet-fire - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Katara,

    Thank you for your kind and instructive comments. I changed the category to prose. I think you're right, it is more porse overall, though, more poetry at the beggining. I'll try to work on making the whole thing more prose like, as you suggested, so it flows more smoothly, instead of having a totally different rhythm at the beggining. Again, thanks for the compliment and the help.

    ~Cari
    | Posted on 2008-05-20 00:50:51 | by Cloacina - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    http://www.eliteskills.com/z/161117

    Hey katara, Remember me? you commented on an unfinished poem that IS simply a long way from being done, its planned to eventually become a really really poem, in the form of story. well ive updated it if youd like to come check it out. your thoughts and words are much appriciated, ill keep your considerations in my mind when it comes time for a final draft. THANKS!~

    -Michael
    | Posted on 2008-05-17 05:15:11 | by siroez - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Why Thank you! Thank you very much for your comment! Good luck with your writing!

    "I will forever hold you in my arms Constantine."

    ~ Kaela
    | Posted on 2008-05-15 16:17:24 | by VampireMaiden - [ Reply to This ] -



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