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    Journal: Oh, Etta
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    Mood: In Love
      
    She sings like a goddamned saxaphone


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    | Posted on 2008-12-22 20:40:25 | by Skillessbasterd - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    | Posted on 2007-07-07 21:57:00 | by rws - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    hey thanks for the comment on picking posies. and saying you like all of my work, i've actually been trying to get back in the groove of it all, but i recently moved out on my own, and as of now, don't have much time. but i'll never quit. and i hope you get something out of my work, it's why i write.

    thanks again


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    | Posted on 2007-03-02 01:19:22 | by Skillessbasterd - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    it's a metaphor for his subconsouis. Like if you playing video games when you should be doing your homework. so it's like you just sitting there playing video games out in the rain. good right?
    | Posted on 2006-12-18 00:00:00 | by Manee69 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the critique! What didn't you like about the womb part? Word choice, or imagery? Thanks again!
    | Posted on 2006-12-18 00:00:00 | by creativeentity - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    exactly how can he watch rain in the rain??? think about it. you have to do something but you don't instead your watching t.v. that's the rain the responsiblity he neglecting. so how can you watch t.v. in the rain? knowing a child needs to be attended to? the rain is also like his concience eating at him know? like stupid you need to do something anything? don't just sit there. if you can't do it atleast ask for help don't wait for the child to grow up and than for him to be the one to tell you "I love you" which felt like I was jumping off a water fall I almost chickened out. O now you want to talk about school? after i flunked all my classes? now you want to care after I already graduated out of high school and not going to college like dude? am paying for your "sins"
    | Posted on 2006-12-17 00:00:00 | by Manee69 - [ Reply to This ] -



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