--Elite Writer Alias: dawnschild Name: Crystal zzzzz ASL: 21/F/Chicago Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 110 Life Story: sleeping [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: 12 Forum Posts: 1 Shoutbox Posts: 1 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 1220 D 3.34 Years 0.33 Decades 40.67 Months 174.29 Weeks 1.22000e+8 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: I am a pilgrim on the edge on the edge of my perception We are travelers at the edge we are all travelers at the edge of our perceptions
hey thanks for the comment on picking posies. and saying you like all of my work, i've actually been trying to get back in the groove of it all, but i recently moved out on my own, and as of now, don't have much time. but i'll never quit. and i hope you get something out of my work, it's why i write.
it's a metaphor for his subconsouis. Like if you playing video games when you should be doing your homework. so it's like you just sitting there playing video games out in the rain. good right?
exactly how can he watch rain in the rain??? think about it. you have to do something but you don't instead your watching t.v. that's the rain the responsiblity he neglecting. so how can you watch t.v. in the rain? knowing a child needs to be attended to? the rain is also like his concience eating at him know? like stupid you need to do something anything? don't just sit there. if you can't do it atleast ask for help don't wait for the child to grow up and than for him to be the one to tell you "I love you" which felt like I was jumping off a water fall I almost chickened out. O now you want to talk about school? after i flunked all my classes? now you want to care after I already graduated out of high school and not going to college like dude? am paying for your "sins"
Right, so I am replying to your question of the meaning behind my poem "Today's Primordial Cry." I realize that this was five months ago, and for that, I apologize. As for my meaning, it was simply about the incessant whining of these now younger generations, while laziness takes them over, and leads them to not do anything about their apparently horrid situation. It's just poking fun at the youngsters.
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