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When the humanity creeps back in we drown in ourselves. Unable to fight back against ourselves because all along we were too far in. its only when the human voices came back that we started to drown and die.
Thanks for the feedback... Yes i agree to many comma's and the reason its in block format is it was required, was suppose to be a really long paragraph hehe... we are now starting actual essays, so I think that will make things alot better... anyways thanks again :) I am glad you liked it.