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    Journal: Drowning
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    Mood: Thinking...
      
    Then the human voices wake us.... and we drown.


    When the humanity creeps back in we drown in ourselves. Unable to fight back against ourselves because all along we were too far in. its only when the human voices came back that we started to drown and die.


    ...Created 2009-08-18 22:55:29     [ View Past Journals ]

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     Masked
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     Puppets to ourselves
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     Justifying my means
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     Night to the light
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     Deep Blue skies.
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     Want to know.
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     Take me away.
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     again some day
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     Storms child
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     Cry out into the night.
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     Shakespearian death
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    ||| Messages |||
      
    Thanks for the feedback... Yes i agree to many comma's and the reason its in block format is it was required, was suppose to be a really long paragraph hehe... we are now starting actual essays, so I think that will make things alot better... anyways thanks again :) I am glad you liked it.
    | Posted on 2009-07-20 00:29:34 | by intodesi - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    ~random ray of sunshine~
    | Posted on 2009-04-30 19:27:23 | by latentlylyrical - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    aussie aussie aussie



    of all the people in the world who shouldnt be saying that...
    youre talking to a kiwi gal right now

    anyways... thanx for your comment on and this is [nothing] more...
    i really have no idea.
    my writing seems to be lacking something vital right now.

    as for punctuation... we dont get along lol. i try my best to use line breaks to help me instead. but i am trying... promise... a girls never too old to learn anything

    thanx again
    see you round
    | Posted on 2007-07-17 09:33:25 | by Someones Epiphany - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    | Posted on 2007-07-07 21:49:59 | by rws - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks for the comment. Apparently not many people liked that piece either so i just deleted it...thanks anyway though...
    pz
    flora
    | Posted on 2007-04-14 09:00:39 | by blankscreen - [ Reply to This ] -



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