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Name: Blake Tietjen
ASL: 21/M/Niceville Fl.
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Website:[ Education ]
Days Away: 5622
Life Story: Feel me behind you?
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Signup Date: 5657 D
15.5 Years 1.55

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So this is sex? by taintedsmiles
Pray Child by BrokenNexava
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Wipe Away Your Bloody Tears

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Hey Blake, I want to say that I do not believe your a bad writer. i love the fact you feel the soul of the writer.
Love to you babe, don't worry about it too much. keep writing, smiles nexa
| Posted on 2007-10-23 13:58:39 | by BrokenNexava - [ Reply to This ] -
Hey. Thanks for your comments. I really appreciate them. Sadly, I haven't been writing much lately. Nothing seems significant in my life right now to write about and its hard forcing words when they aren't there. Thanks for your kind words and I hope to keep in touch <3
| Posted on 2007-10-01 16:33:35 | by giver_of_death - [ Reply to This ] -
Hello Deranged.
Yes.Actually I have to apologise because I was drunk and bored when I wrote all that stuff the other night.Having said that I do think there is a lot of rubbish on here and some people need to be told.Yes,the truth hurts but they need to know otherwise they're just kidding themselves.Oh and not all of my poetry rhymes-check out <First Kiss>.I do think it takes a lot more skill to write rhyming poetry though.
Thanks for your thoughts.
| Posted on 2007-09-29 09:47:39 | by Asakura Cowboy - [ Reply to This ] -

I'm not one to gripe but I feel that your comments though of your own opinion were very unneeded. for someone to post something is in their own interest. If you don't like it don't read it. But these...

1: You are no different from the next sad loser if you cut yourself.Do us all a favour and Kurt Kobain yourself- if that's what seemingly turns you on.Teenager or not.Sadism and death wishes are old and boring.This is a poetry website.Come on! Give us something to shout about and give your self esteem a boost.We don't want to read more suicidal crap.
I dare you to write something unique.

2: Toilet.
Seriously you should give up poetry.You suck arse!How can you think people want to read such crap?!
It's been said a million times before by lovesick teenagers.It's NOT POETRY!!
Get a grip!

3: Absolute garbage.
Get a life and write something decent.

4: Pain is reading the incessant babble that you put out on this website.
Do you seriously think your stuff is good?

I mean if you really want to read some garbage read the stuff you write about my writings. Take into consideration that your not god and you have flaws too. I think that you poetry is very good. I’m sure though that there is someone out there that thinks that your poetry is crap though, and they aren’t saying anything. By the way this isn’t just a poetry site. It’s a writers site. So some of my stuff isn’t poetry. Get a Grip.

Best of wishes to you Asakura Cowboy.

| Posted on 2007-09-27 20:21:30 | by deranged shadow - [ Reply to This ] -
Awww, thank you for the great post on Pray Child, I think thats one of my favorits I've done without editing by my Boyish. Thank you for the Add as a favorit. That is a huge compliment, BOWS TO BLAKE AND SMILES. "I shall try to keep the rest of them up to par"
| Posted on 2007-09-26 17:30:00 | by BrokenNexava - [ Reply to This ] -
Thanks for the comments Blake, I shall try to revamp Enough, I agree with what you said. Thank you.

| Posted on 2007-09-26 17:26:28 | by BrokenNexava - [ Reply to This ] -

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