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Thanks much for your comment on 'A Blind Man Does Not Cry'... appreciated, although I would like to clarify as to the nature of the poem:
The middle section is a story, a recollection of when the narrator could both 'see and hear', as a proud man. (btw, i used 'queer' only to mean 'odd').
Thusly, the man has now lost both. Of course, this is only metaphorical for his heartbreak or loss -when he feels he cannot see or hear anything good.
Wicked cool image! It seems to glow with a life transforming on right there on the screen. Anyway, I wanted to thank you for your comments on my poem. I posted it on another site, but it's different here where other writers comment on your work. Thanks. -Jerome