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    Thanks much for your comment on 'A Blind Man Does Not Cry'... appreciated, although I would like to clarify as to the nature of the poem:

    The middle section is a story, a recollection of when the narrator could both 'see and hear', as a proud man. (btw, i used 'queer' only to mean 'odd').

    Thusly, the man has now lost both. Of course, this is only metaphorical for his heartbreak or loss -when he feels he cannot see or hear anything good.

    I'll check out your poetry;

    -Ari
    | Posted on 2006-11-06 00:00:00 | by Ari Leukos - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Wicked cool image! It seems to glow with a life transforming on right there on the screen.
    Anyway, I wanted to thank you for your comments on my poem. I posted it on another site, but it's different here where other writers comment on your work.
    Thanks.
    -Jerome
    | Posted on 2006-11-06 00:00:00 | by azure_warrior - [ Reply to This ] -



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