--Elite Writer Alias: dthforeverpain8 Name: Chandler (Channie) McRez ASL: 15/Female/tmon Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 1 Life Story: Ha! [ Ignore User ]
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Thanks for your comment on my work. Angst seems to be a popular theme for my poetry at the moment, and I guess getting it all out of my system via writing is a better way to cool off than yelling and having hissy fits >.< It's just a phase
Perhaps I will reconsider my wording choice, but I am disinclined to do so. I think it's something to do with my stubbornness. I always think of grey as a calming tone because it is neither one extremity or the other: a nice compromise, but of course many would disagree =>
-Bonnie
Thank-you for your opinion. It's appreciated.
And yes, I was reluctant to post it, just because that piece is a very sensitive subject for me.
Although, it isn't words of encouragement, I do not believe it makes it an unworthy write.
Some of the best poems have been one's of complete and total despair.
I believe both emotion can be just as beautiful, either calling out in pain or expressing your undying joy.
Again, though, I'm thankful for your opinion and I can definitely see how it came out that way.
Trust me, I'm one who gets annoyed by someone constantly complaining, but when it came to that, it was merely me expressing one of my more deeper feelings and I wrote it at a state of frustation.
It was a time I used to vent with my writing. If you believe that is innapropriate to make public, I'll consider keeping it to myself. Not sure if I should've posted it in the first place since it is rather private.
I think it's mostly because I have been stuck with my writing lately and wasn't able to post anything as of late. So as dark as it was, I still wanted to share my work.
And yes, I agree with you. No matter the years, you will always feel that twinge of pain. Which I am thankful for. I'd never want to forget the relationship I'd had, or the love I've felt.
In a way, that's how you continue to respect what you used to have.
Thanks for the comment on 'Alone'. I usually treat lyrics as a poem too, it's too hard to hear what the writer is trying to say with lyrics when there's no music to accompany it.
A lot of what I've said to you has been condescending. But I promise, somewhere in there I'm talking a bit of sense. Your feature work shows some promise, aside from some strained rhymes it holds up quite well rhythmically (is that how you spell it?). Anyways sorry for the long lecture, pick out the points you feel are not rambling and go from there:P
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