--Elite Writer Alias: dvd7936 Name: Dave Moot ASL: 19/M/Santa Cruz Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 167 Life Story: College [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: 4 Forum Posts: 0 Shoutbox Posts: 0 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 992 D 2.72 Years 0.27 Decades 33.07 Months 141.71 Weeks 9.92000e+7 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: "Life dies inside a person when there are no others willing to be-friend him. He thus gets filled with emptiness and a non-existent sense of self-worth."
Thanks for your comment on "Bobby's First." I was afraid no one would really read it cause it's so long. But you obviously did, and left a very detailed, insightful comment to boot.
I think your idea for my story has a lot of merit and I might very well put it in my revision. (The current post is a rough draft; I just wrote this story today.) Thanks again!
Hello. Thanks for commenting on "Silence". I understand your confussion and i know a clear point would be necesarry if i want someone to actually get what I'm telling, but I wanted to leave room for intepretation, and see how others perceive it. My bad, I like doing that. Well, your second stab in the dark was close. It all relates to the title. I emphasized exactly how deep and at the same time immaterial all these sounds are and how they relate to life in a deeper way. It's about the important things in life people tend to overlook, including death. I didn't want to insert honks or mobile phone sounds because it shouldn't relate to real real life and the things everybody can see around us. Nor a real story. Just something ambiguous. Call me nuts :)