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Name: Dave Moot
ASL: 19/M/Santa Cruz
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Days Away: 5177
Life Story: College
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Signup Date: 6002 D
16.44 Years 1.64 Quote:
"Life dies inside a person when there are no others willing to be-friend him. He thus gets filled with emptiness and a non-existent sense of self-worth."


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A Soldiers Wife by Wisdom Seeker
A Warrior's Thoughts by Lost Sheep
The Pool by JoKing
Poems by AptPupilofLife2
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The Rose and the Pond
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Nah, I think it works fine... and it was just my interpretation...

And who says you can't write poetry? Poetry is bones, prose is flesh... broken down simply...
| Posted on 2006-09-20 00:00:00 | by alteredlife - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Thanks for your comment on "Bobby's First." I was afraid no one would really read it cause it's so long. But you obviously did, and left a very detailed, insightful comment to boot.

I think your idea for my story has a lot of merit and I might very well put it in my revision. (The current post is a rough draft; I just wrote this story today.) Thanks again!
| Posted on 2006-09-08 00:00:00 | by blackpearl - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Hello. Thanks for commenting on "Silence".
I understand your confussion and i know a clear point would be necesarry if i want someone to actually get what I'm telling, but I wanted to leave room for intepretation, and see how others perceive it. My bad, I like doing that.
Well, your second stab in the dark was close. It all relates to the title. I emphasized exactly how deep and at the same time immaterial all these sounds are and how they relate to life in a deeper way. It's about the important things in life people tend to overlook, including death. I didn't want to insert honks or mobile phone sounds because it shouldn't relate to real real life and the things everybody can see around us. Nor a real story. Just something ambiguous. Call me nuts :)

Angie
| Posted on 2006-09-29 00:00:00 | by Angie444 - [ Reply to This ] -



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