--Elite Writer Alias: eggshells Name: Adam Weigel ASL: 23/M/WA Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 14 Life Story: Why don't you ask? [ Ignore User ]
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Journal: What happened? -------------------------------------------
Cant access my account settings and all the greats (that I know of) have left and taken their works with them. I'm so sad I could cry. If any of you (jacoberin, runes, etc.) see this, please shoot me a message with your contact info it would be such a blast from the past and so cool to talk to you all again. I want to see where you all went in life and if any of you did anything with your pieces or if you're still writing and where I can see your work. I will keep this journal up for the next 20 years in the hopes of reaching at least one of you. Looking forward to see your messages!
hey man thanks for the comment. i like what you did with the formatting. i think it made it come out clearer. i generally just do like streams of conscious do i don't pay attention to that stuff. i'm glad you liked it. it's nice to see a comment every now and again.
The feedback was from the viewpoint of a first impression, only to recollect what was already read. There was no intent to play like someone who attacks others work while working for the The New Yorker.
The word "pose" would have been more sustainable for your paragraph instead of "front".
The idea of "knowing it all" was never there.
If I were attempting to be a critic I would have left unnecessary commentary on several of the pieces of your selection.
Which was never considered.
And as for embarrassment to everybody;
It's too late in life to be caring about what "everybody" here thinks about one in depth cut out of feedback that was recently done.
There's not the slightest of regret after the fact. Regardless of what anyone would presume or officiate.
Such an extended piece was inspired by someone else's modern understanding of the I Ching surrounding a student/teacher relationship.
Which I've already have gotten
solid takes on before it arrived here.
Quite frankly put.
The Robert Hughes attitude
wouldn't work much for me
in any environment of artists.
So why return here with that format?
Though, I will say your short contribution was fair enough - when I desired nothing
Thanks so much for the comment and the fave! I am glad you saw the humor... even when I can't sometimes. So... are you married? Like weed? Want to meet my friend? I could use a good quiet weekend ALONE with my MJ for a change.
I promise, I'll roll a phattie for your wedding... ;)