--Elite Writer Alias: eliwhitneyradio Name: eli whitneyradio Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 42 Life Story: Bah. [ Ignore User ]
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I would be lying if I said that I didn't agree with you, but it may be more constructive and well recieved if you were a little less brash, it's not like everyones not trying to write good poetry some people just are unable, but at least there trying,
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P.S. I really like your poetry
I just read the latest comments that you have submitted and I am in sole possession of the one and only half positive comment, I guess I should be flattered, I guess.
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Wow, I thought that I was the only person upset about how rude you were, your comments on my poem "Thurst" although appreciate were out of line and offensive,
but anywho, I will fix the spelling errors and move on.
Oh and Thank you for your comments on "American"
It was greatly appreciated,
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You try too hard, and it's boring. You like to think you're eccentric, but no, not much there... Do you really have anything to say? Or, is your overuse of silly phrases a cover for the fact that you can not compose an original thought?
You would love to be educated enough to be a critic, and throw your insults around. Maybe that makes you feel better about the crap you try to pass as art, but seriously, come down off your pedistal. You're just not that interesting...
i apreciate the comment to my poem. All criticism is welcomed, good or bad. But you need to be able to write poems instead of writing commerical slogans before critising other's poetry. When I read your poems, it felt like I was reading a script to commericals that I hate on TV. At least my have a little more in depth feeling in a simple. Your's just ummmm.....suck!!! So if your going to be a script writer for tv commericals, your on the way. But poetry, your still behind the 8 year olds
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