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    Journal: Silent Hill
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    Mood: so volcanic I've got yellowstone worried
      
    When all is silent
    'cept the air, hot
    and violent
    redolent with noxious
    chemical odor,
    then is the time
    to peek over your
    bony shoulder
    and watch with starry eyes
    as explosive ash
    and careless gods
    consume the skies.

    She is free.


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    a general observation is that you are kind of fluky in your writing. i don't know that i should ask you to address that because free spirits are magic dust and better than ones controlled by the drone of one thing. just saying though, your work freely ranges from expert to novice. wouldn't say that to someone i didn't believe possesses to skills to sort that [with time out in front of them].

    believe you'll be a very very good writer.
    | Posted on 2017-08-30 09:53:36 | by Daniel Barlow - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thank you for your accord. I always welcome a friend , so they do go somewhere , I mean the stars and all,
    no sky on the other-side Teika5
    | Posted on 2017-08-27 01:08:39 | by teika5 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the favorite. I reckon that's one of the best ones I have gotten down for a while. Thanks for the affirmative.

    Thanks also for the comment. I think I'm trying to reanimate a feeling and I would love for ppl to find it there each time on a page. In that sense the poet v surgeon thing is not really important (to me) it's just a tool i used (attempted) to get across my point.

    For me the emotion is the hard thing, the thing of wonder and i'm just some hit and miss dude who acts as a recorder. Glorified recorder....
    not that there is much glory in this.

    Cheers you.
    | Posted on 2017-08-13 16:12:27 | by Daniel Barlow - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    warning was mode down , by theby the holcost
    a substace thak trunes every theing to spit ,,,, Teika5%
    | Posted on 2017-07-31 12:31:01 | by teika5 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey...thank you much for your comments on Desayuno Serenade. Sometimes, the mind can wander to (once) beautiful places. Memories can be priceless - a free of charge, time traveling trip. The interesting thing for me is what sparks the journey - what little flutter to the senses will set things in motion? And once immersed...you are somewhere else...if only for an moment - it's still enough to conjure the once present.

    Well, it's too early for such things :)

    TGIF!

    Kelly
    | Posted on 2017-07-28 03:35:08 | by krs3332003 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey, thanks for the comment. Kind of limited by our abilities -and our abilities to put things on a page or even articulate so it's often you get a whole lot of something converged on just one little bit. Just grateful for the parts i am able to say - when i am able to say it.

    Thanks a lot. Appreciated your thoughts.
    | Posted on 2017-07-19 15:44:19 | by Daniel Barlow - [ Reply to This ] -



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