--Elite Writer Alias: endlessgame23 Name: Edith Gilead ASL: 25/f/The Endless Table Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 561 Life Story: Which Life? [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: 10 Forum Posts: 0 Shoutbox Posts: 0 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 892 D 2.44 Years 0.24 Decades 29.73 Months 127.43 Weeks 8.920000e+7 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity. -EAP
Journal: Silent Hill -------------------------------------------
Mood: so volcanic I've got yellowstone worried
When all is silent
'cept the air, hot
redolent with noxious
then is the time
to peek over your
and watch with starry eyes
as explosive ash
and careless gods
consume the skies.
a general observation is that you are kind of fluky in your writing. i don't know that i should ask you to address that because free spirits are magic dust and better than ones controlled by the drone of one thing. just saying though, your work freely ranges from expert to novice. wouldn't say that to someone i didn't believe possesses to skills to sort that [with time out in front of them].
Thanks for the favorite. I reckon that's one of the best ones I have gotten down for a while. Thanks for the affirmative.
Thanks also for the comment. I think I'm trying to reanimate a feeling and I would love for ppl to find it there each time on a page. In that sense the poet v surgeon thing is not really important (to me) it's just a tool i used (attempted) to get across my point.
For me the emotion is the hard thing, the thing of wonder and i'm just some hit and miss dude who acts as a recorder. Glorified recorder....
not that there is much glory in this.
Hey...thank you much for your comments on Desayuno Serenade. Sometimes, the mind can wander to (once) beautiful places. Memories can be priceless - a free of charge, time traveling trip. The interesting thing for me is what sparks the journey - what little flutter to the senses will set things in motion? And once immersed...you are somewhere else...if only for an moment - it's still enough to conjure the once present.
Hey, thanks for the comment. Kind of limited by our abilities -and our abilities to put things on a page or even articulate so it's often you get a whole lot of something converged on just one little bit. Just grateful for the parts i am able to say - when i am able to say it.