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    Journal: Silent Hill
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    Mood: so volcanic I've got yellowstone worried
      
    When all is silent
    'cept the air, hot
    and violent
    redolent with noxious
    chemical odor,
    then is the time
    to peek over your
    bony shoulder
    and watch with starry eyes
    as explosive ash
    and careless gods
    consume the skies.

    She is free.


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    Thank you for the feedback. I think you are right, I hate to say like I wrote sonething for me, but I was hungover when I wrote it, thinking about the night before while sitting out the back and both those bled into the poem. It really was a wau for me to organise my thoughts. So I dont really want to change it. But your criticism stands, I could have clarified a little in the poem, or built it better across stanzas. Ill keep it in mind.
    | Posted on 2017-07-18 19:29:58 | by Wolfwatching - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    The words shared with a stranger , to express encouragement ,, "is a word, I cant' write",. The one that means so little when maybe the something ells to say too.
    Teik5,..
    | Posted on 2017-07-14 12:42:14 | by teika5 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for your comments on "Pumpkinhead Lullaby".
    And the "Nightmare Before Christmas" is one of my favs...great tunes ;) And I will now be humming NBC songs the rest of the night.

    Thanks again...

    Kelly
    | Posted on 2017-07-12 18:21:59 | by krs3332003 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the review on BOmb-ass Tiding. And, no I'm not into hat made of metal , though i do have theory's seem logical , . lol//// I need lots of improvement tat i do no.
    Teika5
    | Posted on 2017-07-12 16:33:49 | by teika5 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    You are very welcome for the comments on "Scorpio".

    Keep imagining, keep writing, and keep posting!

    K
    | Posted on 2017-07-09 15:24:49 | by krs3332003 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Code said , the numbers match on all the cards . Big money with big ambition.

    Thanks for the reply, Teika5
    | Posted on 2017-07-05 14:52:38 | by teika5 - [ Reply to This ] -



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    Untitled written by Daniel Barlow
    A Thousand Reflections written by endlessgame23
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    Relentless. The Visceral Fracture. written by Daniel Barlow
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    Not the Devil, but the Wind written by endlessgame23
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