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    Journal: Silent Hill
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    Mood: so volcanic I've got yellowstone worried
      
    When all is silent
    'cept the air, hot
    and violent
    redolent with noxious
    chemical odor,
    then is the time
    to peek over your
    bony shoulder
    and watch with starry eyes
    as explosive ash
    and careless gods
    consume the skies.

    She is free.


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    Thank you for the feedback. I think you are right, I hate to say like I wrote sonething for me, but I was hungover when I wrote it, thinking about the night before while sitting out the back and both those bled into the poem. It really was a wau for me to organise my thoughts. So I dont really want to change it. But your criticism stands, I could have clarified a little in the poem, or built it better across stanzas. Ill keep it in mind.
    | Posted on 2017-07-18 19:29:58 | by Wolfwatching - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    The words shared with a stranger , to express encouragement ,, "is a word, I cant' write",. The one that means so little when maybe the something ells to say too.
    Teik5,..
    | Posted on 2017-07-14 12:42:14 | by teika5 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for your comments on "Pumpkinhead Lullaby".
    And the "Nightmare Before Christmas" is one of my favs...great tunes ;) And I will now be humming NBC songs the rest of the night.

    Thanks again...

    Kelly
    | Posted on 2017-07-12 18:21:59 | by krs3332003 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the review on BOmb-ass Tiding. And, no I'm not into hat made of metal , though i do have theory's seem logical , . lol//// I need lots of improvement tat i do no.
    Teika5
    | Posted on 2017-07-12 16:33:49 | by teika5 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    You are very welcome for the comments on "Scorpio".

    Keep imagining, keep writing, and keep posting!

    K
    | Posted on 2017-07-09 15:24:49 | by krs3332003 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Code said , the numbers match on all the cards . Big money with big ambition.

    Thanks for the reply, Teika5
    | Posted on 2017-07-05 14:52:38 | by teika5 - [ Reply to This ] -



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    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth written by endlessgame23
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (6) written by endlessgame23
    The Old Mill written by Wolfwatching
    Etiquette written by saartha
    To the Devil and Candle written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Physician, Heal Thyself written by WriteSomething
    untitled written by ShyOne
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (4) written by endlessgame23
    Still Perfectly Flawed written by armand
    Dream written by closetpoet
    Comme un lion en avril written by Outlaw
    Love written by saartha
    Journey written by endlessgame23
    I, Plutarch written by HisNameIsNoMore
    phantom limbs written by expiring_touch
    // Seasonal Song written by ShadowParadox
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (3) written by endlessgame23
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (1) written by endlessgame23
    Carry written by saartha
    winners circle written by ShyOne
    Angel Eyes written by poetotoe
    Relativity written by poetotoe
    More then just goodbye written by faideddarkness
    Suffer The Children written by poetotoe
    The World written by jjd
    Reliquary of Writ written by HisNameIsNoMore
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    Florida's Autumn Solstice written by closetpoet

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