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    Ashley to Ashes....We All Fall Down



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    Journal: Please
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    Mood: Frustrated
      
    Can't you see that I'm sick of this?
    Chances are you're oblivious To how I feel
    Sitting on your thrown and I'm sure
    That I'm not alone
    Not alone
    Not alone

    Tell me please
    Who the fuck did you want me to be
    Was it something that I couldn't see
    Never knew this would be so political

    And please
    I'm still wearing this miserable skin
    And it's starting to tear from within
    But it's obvious that doesn't bother you
    So Please

    I didn't think that you'd sell me out
    Now I know what your all about
    You might feel in control of things
    But your not holding all the strings
    All the strings
    All the strings

    Tell me please
    Who the fuck did you want me to be
    Was it something that I couldn't see
    Never knew this would be so political


    And please
    I'm still wearing this miserable skin
    And it's starting to tear from within
    But it's obvious that doesn't matter to you

    I've swallowed all your answers
    I've swallowed all my pride
    If you stop all your chances
    I could keep this all inside

    Tell me please
    Who the fuck did you want me to be
    Was it something that I couldn't see
    Never knew this would be so political

    And please
    I'm still wearing this miserable skin
    And it's starting to tear from within
    But it's obvious that doesn't bother you

    So please
    Don't keep telling that it's ok
    I don't buy all the shit that you say
    And quite honestly I'm fucking sick of it.

    So please
    If I cut off this nose from my face
    Then I wouldn't feel so out of place
    But it still wouldn't be quite enough for you
    So please.

    --Staind


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    oh, you should leave me your thoughts, no matter what, just because, and we're all crazy poets, and why not, because life is truly beautiful. and so you should be, right? don't forget, don't be easy, don't be lemon squeezy and trite. stay beautiful, stay beautiful, love light and life.

    ooo yeah. capiche?
    | Posted on 2008-02-05 23:47:08 | by silent strings - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    cool
    | Posted on 2008-02-03 23:32:31 | by silent strings - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I think I made a mistake, commenting on "you" as well as your poetry. I have too much to do with people I really meet, and the social skills of the Net are different!
    | Posted on 2008-01-13 19:47:20 | by Glen Bowman - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thankyou for your kind comments on my poem "Making Dreams come True".....I'm glad you liked it.
    | Posted on 2007-11-30 09:56:32 | by mdsouza - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    i did add three lines to the end of 'i wish i was a heart beat' i would really love if you would tell me what you think om the matter.
    | Posted on 2007-11-14 14:32:21 | by Mr.Ordinary - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    yes, i never intended for it to be so long, i just started to write then bang! it was long, yeah i want to add a end, but at the point i was typing it i was at school and class just ended so i didnt have time to think, thank you much for your imput
    | Posted on 2007-11-14 14:29:14 | by Mr.Ordinary - [ Reply to This ] -



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