Thanks for your comment on my poem “The Sum of my Past”.
No, I am not new to writing, but I can see where you would have got that idea.
This piece was really something I wrote just to put it all on the page, in a sequence, so I was worried more about getting it all in than grammar and fancy metaphors.
So yes, this piece was very rough and very long, because it was written – for the most part – for me. I may go back and reword and all that, it all just depends on whether or not I can get back in the groove of writing, I have been slightly out of it.
I am grateful that you took the time to read through the thing however, and if you are still interested, I look forward to more comments from you.
oh, you should leave me your thoughts, no matter what, just because, and we're all crazy poets, and why not, because life is truly beautiful. and so you should be, right? don't forget, don't be easy, don't be lemon squeezy and trite. stay beautiful, stay beautiful, love light and life.