--Elite Writer Alias: enigmaticone Name: Tom O ASL: 22/m/nh Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 232 Life Story: Broken [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: 0 Forum Posts: 0 Shoutbox Posts: 1 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 341 D 0.93 Years 0.09 Decades 11.37 Months 48.71 Weeks 3.41000e+7 Heart Beats -There you go eggman
Can't you see that I'm sick of this?
Chances are you're oblivious To how I feel
Sitting on your thrown and I'm sure
That I'm not alone
Not alone
Not alone
Tell me please
Who the fuck did you want me to be
Was it something that I couldn't see
Never knew this would be so political
And please
I'm still wearing this miserable skin
And it's starting to tear from within
But it's obvious that doesn't bother you
So Please
I didn't think that you'd sell me out
Now I know what your all about
You might feel in control of things
But your not holding all the strings
All the strings
All the strings
Tell me please
Who the fuck did you want me to be
Was it something that I couldn't see
Never knew this would be so political
And please
I'm still wearing this miserable skin
And it's starting to tear from within
But it's obvious that doesn't matter to you
I've swallowed all your answers
I've swallowed all my pride
If you stop all your chances
I could keep this all inside
Tell me please
Who the fuck did you want me to be
Was it something that I couldn't see
Never knew this would be so political
And please
I'm still wearing this miserable skin
And it's starting to tear from within
But it's obvious that doesn't bother you
So please
Don't keep telling that it's ok
I don't buy all the shit that you say
And quite honestly I'm fucking sick of it.
So please
If I cut off this nose from my face
Then I wouldn't feel so out of place
But it still wouldn't be quite enough for you
So please.
oh, you should leave me your thoughts, no matter what, just because, and we're all crazy poets, and why not, because life is truly beautiful. and so you should be, right? don't forget, don't be easy, don't be lemon squeezy and trite. stay beautiful, stay beautiful, love light and life.
I think I made a mistake, commenting on "you" as well as your poetry. I have too much to do with people I really meet, and the social skills of the Net are different!
yes, i never intended for it to be so long, i just started to write then bang! it was long, yeah i want to add a end, but at the point i was typing it i was at school and class just ended so i didnt have time to think, thank you much for your imput