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    What a great idea I will get right on that.

    Seriously though that poem is drafty as hell, it's a head-down run for the finish. It might be better if I did just make it 3 lines.

    In other news, have you ever had a song come to you in your sleep? I was sure it was from somewhere, but I did an internet search at 3am and nothing.

    Was gonna sing it into my iPhone but I thought nah... not worth cranky bedfellows. I can remember the progression but the rhythm is all wrong... there were subtleties that are missing.

    Gonna just do that shit next time.

    How's things?
    | Posted on 2017-01-12 22:11:12 | by lukewarm - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Soggy soggy soggy true but hey
    It....
    Uh...
    I dunno.

    It's more geared towards comments? Whereas prose maybe you get a sentence out of someone. And following doesn't seem to mean anything I still get horrible angst poetry everywhere and no notifications when someone posts new shit

    Still
    I think this party's done.

    When the tequila runs out
    We'll be drinking champagne.
    | Posted on 2016-11-16 19:56:59 | by lukewarm - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    oh and I literally have nothing new on the prose. It's just me posting old poetry and waiting to actually read something good in the stream, which is pretentious-as-fuck-i-know but damn sometimes i just wanna put these whiny teenagers outta their misery.

    the quality of our suffering and all that.
    | Posted on 2016-09-23 00:16:34 | by lukewarm - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    ugh, please don't feed the ego human food. I try to keep it on a strict diet.

    You probably wouldn't have heard about the Nephilim in Sunday school cause Sunday school was all horrible lies by balding fat men named Mark who adopted children from Russia and named them stupid things.

    But let me geek out for a minute. There's this Mountain Goats song called Deuteronomy 2:10 that pretty much floors me every time I hear it, and one day I looked up what that verse actually meant. Apparently there are several races of giants in the bible, among them Emites, Anakites, and the Nephilim. Who fucken knew.

    So yeah Genesis 6:4 describes them as the offspring of the sons of God sleeping with human women. Some translations just say "giants" rather than use the word Nephilim.
    Definitely reminded me of Greek gods. There are a few more mentions of giants, but you have to be a better scholar than I am and actually have read the bible to catch them.

    Anyway, so yeah in the poem what I'm trying to say is something like the gravestone of a giant, but also something ancient, forgotten, and put to ill use. A life mis-spent, sure. So the porch is live the fallen gravestone of some huge once-great creature, that's now crumbling into pieces.
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    In a band or interviewing a band?
    | Posted on 2016-09-15 20:50:23 | by lukewarm - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    the man in the wheelchair is Greg Abbott and it's ableist to say I shouldn't fight people just because they're in wheelchairs :) Also he deserves it

    ah maybe i'll check our theprose. honestly I'm ready to stop moping around in abandoned parts of the rust belt internet. let's take this mope show on the road.

    These days I'm tackling html and css and management skills more than the written word, but I'm not actually mad about that. I'm still going to write stuff and play music, but it's just another gear that keeps life turning.

    planning on stopping by third man records on my way through Nashville and making squee sounds like a small child while the girlfriend rolls her eyes. should be thoroughly satisfying.






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