Title: "Things Not Ever To Be Said In A Poetry or Prose Workshop"
Oh workshops, workshops, workshops.
Why am I not a creative writing major? This is why:
Notes:
-exposition needs to be developed
-"perch" = bad usage of the word
-egg yolk simile needs work
-need more back story
-develop the conflict
-pick mint or peppers
-your characters need names
-i'm left out
-your spacing is off ( i still don't know what this means)
-it's unrelateable
-i was left wanting more ( this was a negative comment. go figure.)
-more dialogue is necessary
-odd and abrupted ending
Now... I'm not trying to be an asshole (it's second nature, of course. But I'm not
trying..).
However...
I don't think I believe in taking a class to learn how to change myself to be able to market these things that come from my fingers and turn them around for a profit.
Maybe I don't want you to connect or relate.
I have a feeling I put more thought into how I arrange my sentences than how most of you put into how you plan to tell your Mormon parents about your new black boyfriend.
Just because the professor gave you a handout that concerned conflict, plot arch, and tension doesn't mean it has to be obvious.
I hate you all and wish you would die.
Thank you.
scene
I'm an asshole.
This wasn't meant for you.
...Created 2009-11-20 22:41:16 [
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