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     Letters to the earth
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     Sand
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     Salt
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     Krestovuj Hod
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     Featured workMetamorphosed (revised)
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     Anschaffungen
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     Eclipse
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     Adultery
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     Silent winter morning
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    ::Love : Class : Poetry :
     I lied to golden skies
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     Summer's End
    :|| V: 579 | C: 4 ||:
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     Daned
    :|| V: 179 | C: 3 ||:
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     I subside- let muses whisper in my ear
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     Between two
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     I went into the snowfall
    :|| V: 142 | C: 1 ||:
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     March
    :|| V: 209 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Longing : Class : Poetry :
     Spring Homecoming (revised)
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     Sculptured
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     Iced Butterfly
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     Observer
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    Hi, I would like to thank you for your comment on "..love is deceit..". I appreciate your words but I would actually like to hear about how you think I can change it. I never wanted it to get weeping or moany. LOL, I had never noticed it? Do you have any suggestions? Or maybe even the area that dropped your interest?

    Thanks
    Still
    | Posted on 2008-08-18 06:27:23 | by StillimCold - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the read. It was actually my modification of some song lyrics I'd heard several dozen times.
    | Posted on 2008-08-08 12:36:43 | by rws - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    awesome!

    if i didn't know, i wouldn't be able to tell. you're really better than most native-born english speakers. you pay attention/seem to care about grammar and the other specifics

    haha i hope the comment wasn't too much to handle. i go all in when i nitpick ;)

    rachel
    | Posted on 2008-06-20 23:00:25 | by sadtrapofgravit - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    hmmm. It is rather westerncentric; using beaches and cars and people getting upset over little things and plays on christian songs. The only thing i'm going to disagree with you on is the 'promise' of happiness. I think it's more like the possibility of happiness.
    | Posted on 2008-06-20 19:44:27 | by lukewarm - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    your comment on my poem, the pursuit, was quite founded, i appreciate your insight. while i do believe the decoration of love within poetry has become somewhat cliché, there is still so much left unsaid. i only mean to define my own understanding, my definition...this, i believe, is the most sincere form of decoration love can receive, be it in poetry, or words and actions from one to another...

    thanks again...
    | Posted on 2008-06-18 22:01:25 | by wonderbread1000 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for your most wonderful and kind comments on my poem "Danielle"! (and yes, I do, somewhat, play "fast and loose" (another nasty idiom!) with English usage, here... This poem is based upon "A Match" by Algernon Charlese Swinburne:
    http://www.potw.org/archive/potw327.html
    | Posted on 2008-06-18 09:32:59 | by Algol46 - [ Reply to This ] -



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