Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    --Elite Writer
    Alias: expiring_touch
    Name: Yulia
    ASL: 30/f/Hamburg
    Website:[ Website ]
    Days Away: 10
    Life Story:
    [ Ignore User ]

    Favorites: 8
    Forum Posts: 0
    Shoutbox Posts: 0
    RP Posts: 0
    Signup Date: 5898 D
    16.16 Years 1.62 Decades
    196.6 Months 842.57 Weeks
    5.898000e+8 Heart Beats
    -There you go eggman

    nav
    nav

    [ Communicate asdf ]

    Recent Favorites:
    Horrid by JanePlane
    Mandelbrot Equations in Watercolour by alteredlife
    On Till Morning by Fantastic Freya
    I think I'll fold by IamYourTragedy
    Asylum by rws
    View all Faves

    Featured:
    Munyonyo



    [ + RSS ]
    [ + Google It ]
    [ + My Yahoo ]



    dotsLast 20 Submissionsdots

    Featured: Munyonyo

     Post workout
    :|| V: 21 | C: 0 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     Joburg
    :|| V: 32 | C: 0 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     Midterm
    :|| V: 59 | C: 0 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     Wurmloch
    :|| V: 86 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     Ciêla
    :|| V: 129 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     Canovo 1
    :|| V: 398 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     Adulting
    :|| V: 314 | C: 0 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     the longest journey
    :|| V: 417 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     Beads
    :|| V: 401 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     German
    :|| V: 593 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     By the bar
    :|| V: 1226 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     Featured workMunyonyo
    :|| V: 1245 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     Date night
    :|| V: 1197 | C: 0 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     mimicry
    :|| V: 1991 | C: 0 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     phantom limbs
    :|| V: 1926 | C: 0 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     Across the bed
    :|| V: 2000 | C: 0 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     poet
    :|| V: 1335 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     in Dar
    :|| V: 1293 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     Tribute
    :|| V: 1942 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     Sundays
    :|| V: 1891 | C: 0 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
    List All...





    ||| Messages |||
      
    You know that is what's going on in the poem. But also that's a very good comment. Odlly enough, it seems to me to be the mundane things that bring about the strongest feelings sometimes, and those moments you think should feel huge can leave you empty. A mundane thing that happens is more interesting most of the time than any exciting thing you try to contrive.

    Thanks for the thoughts.
    | Posted on 2021-11-22 10:14:39 | by Wolfwatching - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for leaving a comment on my latest effort. Obviously I'm trying to get back into good graces with the muses, but we'll see how that goes.

    Lloyd
    | Posted on 2020-12-28 13:08:52 | by Blue Monk - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks Yulia, there are things that are working in the poem and there are things that are still missing. I guess the resonating of the base and replication of voice can trick you into feeling as if you are right there with someone or something (emotion).

    We have an odd relationship in that from time to time we keep coming over to eachother's page and really appreciating something. I look to continue that. I do feel glad you post your work.
    | Posted on 2017-10-14 20:47:09 | by Daniel Barlow - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the specific feedback on that one Yulia. I think the end is killer diller but I wasn't so certain I had set that one up right. Your close attention was illuminating and kind of nice so thank you.
    | Posted on 2017-02-15 16:08:06 | by Daniel Barlow - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the gracious comments. Meant a lot.
    | Posted on 2016-07-25 01:59:50 | by Daniel Barlow - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Oh yeah, I appreciate the positives and the offer to help. As far as we had gotten was deciding we'd like a place for good work to gravitate and people to get recognition.

    I guess what I'm saying is we kind of need more talks between two before we could decide whether we needed talks between three, but, honestly, i would be just as pleased if there were 100 editors so long those two main objectives were met: a place for good work to gravitate, a place were publication was its own reward.

    Having said all that I'm really encouraged by your interest,

    As a 'for me' thing
    I also kind of liked the idea that people would naturally have questions about the editors etc and I could say "Who, me?
    No, I don't write"


    | Posted on 2016-04-09 13:09:24 | by Daniel Barlow - [ Reply to This ] -



    Format Text?


    Forum id=#23744

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.


    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry