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    I apologize in advance for the really useless comments I left you. I just wanted to leave myself breadcrumbs so I could remember to come back here. I enjoy your work.
    | Posted on 2014-04-30 01:57:33 | by etheror - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hi!

    Thanks for the two comments. I think you're right about the one, and I was actually thinking that the middle while good is kinda distracting so I thought I'd cut it down to size:

    he is at once a message and fierce fierce quiet, still.

    while I, on the other hand, am more like the moon
    that gathers over the ground in small places,
    like water:

    (If there is something that does not waver,
    I cannot be it.)

    And yet:
    I am no more
    no less

    than him.

    Maybe more in the right direction of what the poem could be. And thank you for the words on "for now" as well. I'm glad you liked.
    | Posted on 2013-01-21 00:44:17 | by Aym - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for your comment.
    I have read Some Rilke but not his Elegies I think now I really should rectify this situation. Also You seem to have a different translation than the one on PoemHunter. Could you provide me with a link where I might read it?
    | Posted on 2013-01-20 11:08:47 | by DaleP - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for commenting on 'mornings, diaphanous'. It was appreciated. But I've made the decision to not interact/comment here anymore. Cheers.
    | Posted on 2012-10-25 05:16:32 | by trinityfinger - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    i see, makes sense on the keyhole issue...

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-09-16 15:26:48 | by jacoberin - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the comment on Steel Wool. My stuff seems really scattered at times, it's definitely something I've been working on but I like to think it adds a lot of different visuals and levels to take a poem on. From the big to the small.

    Thanks again for the hat tipping!
    | Posted on 2012-06-20 21:10:08 | by Silenced Hope - [ Reply to This ] -



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