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Name: emanaton mynoduesp
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Mood: whatev
  
worms
worms

their dried, flattened bodies
coiled on the sidewalk,
curlicues
like seahorse tails in a sea of concrete

i keep my eyes on the ground,
afraid of stepping on these carcasses,
once alive and squirming;
afraid of leaving a brown smear,
smudging upon my so(u)le --

but there are some things more important than fear

so i look up to the sky,
note the clouds sprawling across the wide expanse of turquoise,
see the bird my friend points to with an outstretched finger,
          like adam to god
          like that beloved extraterrestrial

what's dead is dead
i'll remember the worms, but
i see living


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boo.
| Posted on 2009-06-02 22:40:27 | by meoww - [ Reply to This ] -
  
http://www.writerscafe.org/writers/Jason_Morales/
http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=512381431
You can find me at both. I've had enough of the general emo-ness and stuckup elitism of this place. Website suits its name... how ironic... that it took so long to finally go "FARK IT".


electrons'


i search for

timelessness
in others

in you

grazing questions
over your plate

wordy eyes

explaining
the significance

of what we do

here
and tomorrow

~

i ask
that you

remember me
somehow

beyond this
captive garden

we are finches
i answer

more to the sky
than you

~

we float
in memories

unearth

each other's
lines


| Posted on 2008-05-19 08:44:57 | by alteredlife - [ Reply to This ] -
  
p.s. this bit:
can't see,
can't you SEE
i don't like the repetition, and the SHOUTING grates... a bit emo, y'know? haha, just my first thoughts in that bit.
| Posted on 2008-03-15 13:37:46 | by silent strings - [ Reply to This ] -
  
glad you noticed the synaesthesia... i'm very synaesthetic, actually...

i agree with you about 'follicles'... rhythmically it trips me up. 'bubbling' i'll keep though, if only for the triple 'b' alliteration i have in that line. yup.

thanks for reading/stopping by

| Posted on 2008-03-15 13:34:04 | by silent strings - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Hey, thanks so much for your thoughts on 'compilation'. I have never grouped poems together before, and needed opinions if it works or not. I am not happy with it as I re-read the pieces over again. Monies is an actual word (heheh)but I changed the other error and am considering a title change. I really do appreciate your time, consideration, and ideas. Seriously.
| Posted on 2008-02-27 10:34:30 | by isabella - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Huh? Me no speaka de French.
| Posted on 2008-02-25 22:38:57 | by alteredlife - [ Reply to This ] -



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