|| Posted on 2009-06-02 22:40:27 | by meoww - [ Reply to This ] -|
You can find me at both. I've had enough of the general emo-ness and stuckup elitism of this place. Website suits its name... how ironic... that it took so long to finally go "FARK IT".
i search for
over your plate
of what we do
we are finches
more to the sky
|| Posted on 2008-05-19 08:44:57 | by alteredlife - [ Reply to This ] -|
p.s. this bit:
can't you SEE
i don't like the repetition, and the SHOUTING grates... a bit emo, y'know? haha, just my first thoughts in that bit.
|| Posted on 2008-03-15 13:37:46 | by silent strings - [ Reply to This ] -|
glad you noticed the synaesthesia... i'm very synaesthetic, actually...
i agree with you about 'follicles'... rhythmically it trips me up. 'bubbling' i'll keep though, if only for the triple 'b' alliteration i have in that line. yup.
thanks for reading/stopping by
|| Posted on 2008-03-15 13:34:04 | by silent strings - [ Reply to This ] -|
Hey, thanks so much for your thoughts on 'compilation'. I have never grouped poems together before, and needed opinions if it works or not. I am not happy with it as I re-read the pieces over again. Monies is an actual word (heheh)but I changed the other error and am considering a title change. I really do appreciate your time, consideration, and ideas. Seriously.
|| Posted on 2008-02-27 10:34:30 | by isabella - [ Reply to This ] -|
Huh? Me no speaka de French.
|| Posted on 2008-02-25 22:38:57 | by alteredlife - [ Reply to This ] -|