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    Journal: just like us
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    Mood: whatev
      
    worms
    worms

    their dried, flattened bodies
    coiled on the sidewalk,
    curlicues
    like seahorse tails in a sea of concrete

    i keep my eyes on the ground,
    afraid of stepping on these carcasses,
    once alive and squirming;
    afraid of leaving a brown smear,
    smudging upon my so(u)le --

    but there are some things more important than fear

    so i look up to the sky,
    note the clouds sprawling across the wide expanse of turquoise,
    see the bird my friend points to with an outstretched finger,
              like adam to god
              like that beloved extraterrestrial

    what's dead is dead
    i'll remember the worms, but
    i see living


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    boo.
    | Posted on 2009-06-02 22:40:27 | by meoww - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    http://www.writerscafe.org/writers/Jason_Morales/
    http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=512381431
    You can find me at both. I've had enough of the general emo-ness and stuckup elitism of this place. Website suits its name... how ironic... that it took so long to finally go "FARK IT".


    electrons'


    i search for

    timelessness
    in others

    in you

    grazing questions
    over your plate

    wordy eyes

    explaining
    the significance

    of what we do

    here
    and tomorrow

    ~

    i ask
    that you

    remember me
    somehow

    beyond this
    captive garden

    we are finches
    i answer

    more to the sky
    than you

    ~

    we float
    in memories

    unearth

    each other's
    lines


    | Posted on 2008-05-19 08:44:57 | by alteredlife - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    p.s. this bit:
    can't see,
    can't you SEE
    i don't like the repetition, and the SHOUTING grates... a bit emo, y'know? haha, just my first thoughts in that bit.
    | Posted on 2008-03-15 13:37:46 | by silent strings - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    glad you noticed the synaesthesia... i'm very synaesthetic, actually...

    i agree with you about 'follicles'... rhythmically it trips me up. 'bubbling' i'll keep though, if only for the triple 'b' alliteration i have in that line. yup.

    thanks for reading/stopping by

    | Posted on 2008-03-15 13:34:04 | by silent strings - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey, thanks so much for your thoughts on 'compilation'. I have never grouped poems together before, and needed opinions if it works or not. I am not happy with it as I re-read the pieces over again. Monies is an actual word (heheh)but I changed the other error and am considering a title change. I really do appreciate your time, consideration, and ideas. Seriously.
    | Posted on 2008-02-27 10:34:30 | by isabella - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Huh? Me no speaka de French.
    | Posted on 2008-02-25 22:38:57 | by alteredlife - [ Reply to This ] -



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