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    Journal: Its every day
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    Mood: Moo! 0.o
      
    Under submitted skies I keep walking waiting for the light of the moon to pass over these transgressions and to stable the pulses that rage inside me. Slowing under the full moon I drift further apart from this forbidden soul that clings so deeply inside my skin. Even through a revise of me, my mind fights undoubtedly to cling harder to keep fighting to keep walking, and to keep going.


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    Thank you for the comment on my poem “Pivot Point”. I am glad you saw some sort of image – I had feared I had failed to produce the one in my head – the fact that you can see one at all at least gives me hope on that matter.

    As for the extra “my”, it was nothing more than a typo and I thank you for pointing it out to me. Usually people say something like – “other than a few grammatical errors, the piece was fine” – and that isn’t much help.

    Anyways I am glad you liked it. It took a lot from me as I wrote it, as it had a very specific purpose and needed a deeper feel and better literary quality than other poems which I write for the most part for myself.

    Thanks again
    Chandler
    | Posted on 2010-02-08 06:54:24 | by dthforeverpain8 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Too good....definately
    | Posted on 2010-02-03 21:14:01 | by Silenced Hope - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I rarely get angry. A big reason why is my ability to rationalize how and why I feel. The other big reason is that I release how I feel in what I write.

    I wouldn't describe it so much as hate as I would call it hurt.

    It worked out good for me. I don't know about her...we're not on speaking terms (her request). I hope she's getting better. I hope she's happier.

    Eli
    | Posted on 2010-02-02 21:16:58 | by Silenced Hope - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    This was the angry break up poem that came from when she and I broke up...I have a hard time getting angry but this wasn't supposed to be a rant about how unfair she is or was (which she wasn't) as much as how I felt about the whole situation.

    Maybe I changed but maybe I fell in love with the wrong person...I dunno.

    I like this poem very much. Definately an honest and personal one.

    I hope you got as much out of reading it as I did writing it.

    It made sense by the way.
    | Posted on 2010-02-01 15:45:10 | by Silenced Hope - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I absolutley love your comments! They make me smile. Many people don't understand the effort I try to put into viewing myself from someone elses eyes, but you did. Thank you so very much for your insight.
    Love, Rachelle
    | Posted on 2010-01-19 08:58:57 | by Priestess - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Charles, thanks for coming by, and for your comments on "In My Dreams".
    | Posted on 2010-01-06 10:02:09 | by Ron Cole - [ Reply to This ] -



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