Name: Faid Faideddarkness
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14.27 Years 1.43 Quote:
If you cant beat the darkness, sometimes to beat it you must go through it.
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Just a quick "thank you" for your comment on "The Distance." It was much appreciated!
|| Posted on 2010-02-10 19:09:46 | by bereftXofXheart - [ Reply to This ] -|
Thank you for the comment on my poem “Pivot Point”. I am glad you saw some sort of image – I had feared I had failed to produce the one in my head – the fact that you can see one at all at least gives me hope on that matter.
As for the extra “my”, it was nothing more than a typo and I thank you for pointing it out to me. Usually people say something like – “other than a few grammatical errors, the piece was fine” – and that isn’t much help.
Anyways I am glad you liked it. It took a lot from me as I wrote it, as it had a very specific purpose and needed a deeper feel and better literary quality than other poems which I write for the most part for myself.
|| Posted on 2010-02-08 06:54:24 | by dthforeverpain8 - [ Reply to This ] -|
|| Posted on 2010-02-03 21:14:01 | by Silenced Hope - [ Reply to This ] -|
I rarely get angry. A big reason why is my ability to rationalize how and why I feel. The other big reason is that I release how I feel in what I write.
I wouldn't describe it so much as hate as I would call it hurt.
It worked out good for me. I don't know about her...we're not on speaking terms (her request). I hope she's getting better. I hope she's happier.
|| Posted on 2010-02-02 21:16:58 | by Silenced Hope - [ Reply to This ] -|
This was the angry break up poem that came from when she and I broke up...I have a hard time getting angry but this wasn't supposed to be a rant about how unfair she is or was (which she wasn't) as much as how I felt about the whole situation.
Maybe I changed but maybe I fell in love with the wrong person...I dunno.
I like this poem very much. Definately an honest and personal one.
I hope you got as much out of reading it as I did writing it.
It made sense by the way.
|| Posted on 2010-02-01 15:45:10 | by Silenced Hope - [ Reply to This ] -|
I absolutley love your comments! They make me smile. Many people don't understand the effort I try to put into viewing myself from someone elses eyes, but you did. Thank you so very much for your insight.
|| Posted on 2010-01-19 08:58:57 | by Priestess - [ Reply to This ] -|