--Elite Writer Alias: faideddarkness Name: Faid Faideddarkness ASL: 28 - Male - Idaho Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 67 Life Story: [ Ignore User ]
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Journal: Its every day -------------------------------------------
Mood: Moo! 0.o
Under submitted skies I keep walking waiting for the light of the moon to pass over these transgressions and to stable the pulses that rage inside me. Slowing under the full moon I drift further apart from this forbidden soul that clings so deeply inside my skin. Even through a revise of me, my mind fights undoubtedly to cling harder to keep fighting to keep walking, and to keep going.
Thank you for the comment on my poem “Pivot Point”. I am glad you saw some sort of image – I had feared I had failed to produce the one in my head – the fact that you can see one at all at least gives me hope on that matter.
As for the extra “my”, it was nothing more than a typo and I thank you for pointing it out to me. Usually people say something like – “other than a few grammatical errors, the piece was fine” – and that isn’t much help.
Anyways I am glad you liked it. It took a lot from me as I wrote it, as it had a very specific purpose and needed a deeper feel and better literary quality than other poems which I write for the most part for myself.
This was the angry break up poem that came from when she and I broke up...I have a hard time getting angry but this wasn't supposed to be a rant about how unfair she is or was (which she wasn't) as much as how I felt about the whole situation.
Maybe I changed but maybe I fell in love with the wrong person...I dunno.
I like this poem very much. Definately an honest and personal one.
I hope you got as much out of reading it as I did writing it.
I absolutley love your comments! They make me smile. Many people don't understand the effort I try to put into viewing myself from someone elses eyes, but you did. Thank you so very much for your insight.