--Elite Writer Alias: faideddarkness Name: Faid Faideddarkness ASL: 28 - Male - Idaho Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 29 Life Story: [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: 9 Forum Posts: 0 Shoutbox Posts: 0 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 3614 D 9.9 Years 0.99 Decades 120.47 Months 516.29 Weeks 3.614000e+8 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: If you cant beat the darkness, sometimes to beat it you must go through it.
If I could gain the power to lasso the sun I would not use it to destroy men to end wars of many wars for there will only born new wars. I would build new worlds and leave behind man, the owner of this world, to breathe the ashes of his own death that he brought only for himself.
Thank you for the comment on my poem “Pivot Point”. I am glad you saw some sort of image – I had feared I had failed to produce the one in my head – the fact that you can see one at all at least gives me hope on that matter.
As for the extra “my”, it was nothing more than a typo and I thank you for pointing it out to me. Usually people say something like – “other than a few grammatical errors, the piece was fine” – and that isn’t much help.
Anyways I am glad you liked it. It took a lot from me as I wrote it, as it had a very specific purpose and needed a deeper feel and better literary quality than other poems which I write for the most part for myself.
This was the angry break up poem that came from when she and I broke up...I have a hard time getting angry but this wasn't supposed to be a rant about how unfair she is or was (which she wasn't) as much as how I felt about the whole situation.
Maybe I changed but maybe I fell in love with the wrong person...I dunno.
I like this poem very much. Definately an honest and personal one.
I hope you got as much out of reading it as I did writing it.
I absolutley love your comments! They make me smile. Many people don't understand the effort I try to put into viewing myself from someone elses eyes, but you did. Thank you so very much for your insight.