thank you for your honest comment
i guess the first verse was somewhat to allow the reader to see his state of mind, like how after some fights, your mind go reeling... tumbling, like that i guess
i do admit it came out to be rather repetitive
is that a bad thing?
as for "...then I saw the genius of revealing truth to be just as painful as hate and lies."
i am sad to say, its not genius... its from past experience
anyway, thank you for stopping by to leave a review
hey miss m,
thanks for your wonderful and thoughtful comment on my poem. i like how you have a whole different take on my simple poem. I was looking out the window one morning on my way to school and the sky was terrible, but near the end of the dark cloud was a little hope of light. that i guess was my inspiration. im glad you enjoyed it and i hope to read your writing soon.
have a wondrous day without gloomy thoughts