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    thank you for your honest comment
    i guess the first verse was somewhat to allow the reader to see his state of mind, like how after some fights, your mind go reeling... tumbling, like that i guess
    i do admit it came out to be rather repetitive
    >.<
    is that a bad thing?

    as for "...then I saw the genius of revealing truth to be just as painful as hate and lies."
    i am sad to say, its not genius... its from past experience

    anyway, thank you for stopping by to leave a review
    | Posted on 2008-11-10 14:13:45 | by rubymoon - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    hey miss m,
    thanks for your wonderful and thoughtful comment on my poem. i like how you have a whole different take on my simple poem. I was looking out the window one morning on my way to school and the sky was terrible, but near the end of the dark cloud was a little hope of light. that i guess was my inspiration. im glad you enjoyed it and i hope to read your writing soon.
    have a wondrous day without gloomy thoughts
    -trickling.
    | Posted on 2008-11-08 20:05:08 | by tricklingrain - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Crap...didn't work. Oh well, sorry. = \
    | Posted on 2008-10-16 06:20:48 | by Forest Saint - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hello, here's a fun sketch.

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    | Posted on 2008-10-16 06:20:26 | by Forest Saint - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks so much for the comment :)

    I liked it at first and then i didnt once i posted it and i thought "this poem is gonna be nothing but bashed" and then you loved it enough to fave it and it makes me smile that you understand :]

    Awesome

    Thanks again :] :]

    -Moz-
    | Posted on 2008-07-10 08:35:24 | by GoKart Mozart - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hello. Sorry for the late response. Thank you for adding "Of Strings and Balloons" to your favorite list.
    | Posted on 2008-05-04 06:25:38 | by ANGELO - [ Reply to This ] -



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