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    Journal: a strange road
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    Mood: Thinking...
      
    Things are going strangely for me. Im not really sure of where im going to go with everything that im doing right now in school and everything. I feel like many different people trapped inside one indecisive rock all screaming whats best to do. Writing my story has helped a great deal. while its only been two days into writing i have some faith for its survival in my minds constantly changing appetites. If you dont know by now "Sequitur" is my new story that is getting decent comments by the kind people at writerscafe. I would appreciate any ideas/feedback so go check it out. Anyway I think I will just have to trust in God and see how things go. Hopefully something soon.


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    Hey ummm... Thanx for that comment a whileback cause i would have replyed earlier but I had no internet. As for ur question ur pretty much right and Accually i was going through a hard time that month i wrote that poem and it had kinda helped me relax. well umm Thats for the tips ill use themin some of my later poems.
    Peace out
    | Posted on 2007-04-01 06:14:53 | by Sepheroth432 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Ahh... as for the journal entry, welcome to being a teenager. From one who survived it.
    | Posted on 2007-02-11 09:26:31 | by Blue Monk - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    It's all good, and no problem:) I'll definitly check out more of your pieces soon:)


    Later,
    Sam:)
    | Posted on 2007-01-29 12:59:23 | by Falling Rain - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hello! Thank you very much for the comment on And then, there were none.
    I don't like Agatha Christie much because I find Poirot a little annoying and roundabout. But I do enjoy her mystery stories once I get rid of all the roundabout-ness.
    Thanks again
    Cheers
    Azuire
    | Posted on 2007-01-06 00:00:00 | by Azuire - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey thanks for the comment on "My Brick in the Wall", religion class gets boring.
    | Posted on 2007-01-04 00:00:00 | by atonement - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Happy New Year to you too...and thanks for the review. Hey, I just read your newest post and will comment in a few.
    Stop by again sometime

    JeN~**
    | Posted on 2007-01-01 00:00:00 | by metalnymph - [ Reply to This ] -



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