--Elite Writer Alias: freeangel Name: Becki Woods ASL: 22/female/bournemouth Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 8 Life Story: uni student :) [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: 2 Forum Posts: 2 Shoutbox Posts: 4 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 1141 D 3.13 Years 0.31 Decades 38.03 Months 163 Weeks 1.14100e+8 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: life is like a flimsy bridge stretched across an endless sea, at some point it breaks whilst we cluster on it, dropping us like stones into the cool blackness
Thanks for the post, I actually don't change my poems often after posting them but I did this time. Your suggestion was a very good one and I could hear the bump in it as I re-read it. I hope you like the change, personally I think it sounds much better.
heyla
just wanted to say gracias for commenting on my poems. and my childhood had its good times and it's bad-just like everyone else's. but the one about marching band was only 2 years ago so i dont really consider that one childhood. but i know what you meant =]