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    Featured: Afternoon Walk

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    thanks for your comment. I greatly appreciate it. I know the post is nothing special, I just felt the need to write something, you know? And I needed to get a few thoughts out of my system, some feelings. But yea thanks a lot and it means a ton that you could relate to the piece.

    -Randee
    | Posted on 2009-04-08 20:36:59 | by UnderlinedInRed - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    um, i know i said *checks the date of his lest messg* a couple weeks ago that i'd comment your work, but now that i've finally got off my lazy arse to write one for you, i find you've been gone for 33days and stupid ES isn't allowing me to submit one. it would be great if you could maybe log in just long enough so i can write you something. i'd feel better.

    oh, and messg my page when you do coz i'll no doubt forget to check up on you.

    i don't want much, do i? :D

    okay, thanks a lot.

    Jaco
    | Posted on 2008-09-16 17:53:46 | by Jacoby - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    sorry it's taken a while for me to thank you for the comment you left on my poem. i very much appreciate your kind words. i shall return the favour and comment one of your submissions tomorrow - i have some spare time in the evening.

    thanks again.

    Jacoby
    | Posted on 2008-08-24 17:23:25 | by Jacoby - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Reply:First Winter Snow


    I revised and updated this poem. Please tell me what you think
    | Posted on 2008-03-23 04:09:59 | by FireFly747 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the grammar help. I'm actually fond of repetition, that's why I had the '79 paired with the '69. Mainly due to the 1969 song by Iggy and The Stooges. ^-^ And the sudden breaks were on purpose and with purpose as well. Again in reference to Iggy. There's a lot of references to The Stooges in there. But in the song Raw Power, there's a slight break in the end with just instruments then he breaks in and goes nuts singing/screaming "Raw power!" a bunch of times. I tried to kind of mimic that effect. *shrug*
    I'm glad you liked it though!
    | Posted on 2008-03-02 01:30:51 | by doppelganger - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I can't thank you enough for the comments. Your words are very much appreciated

    Have a wonderful day!!

    -nikkki
    | Posted on 2007-09-30 16:08:02 | by Razor2TheRosary - [ Reply to This ] -



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