--Elite Writer Alias: freshcookies Name: Natalie Ryder Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 2325 Life Story: living on faith [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: 6 Forum Posts: 2 Shoutbox Posts: 0 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 5155 D 14.12 Years 1.41 Decades 171.83 Months 736.43 Weeks 5.155000e+8 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: &quot;Boredom is no more than refusing to relax&quot;
thanks for your comment. I greatly appreciate it. I know the post is nothing special, I just felt the need to write something, you know? And I needed to get a few thoughts out of my system, some feelings. But yea thanks a lot and it means a ton that you could relate to the piece.
um, i know i said *checks the date of his lest messg* a couple weeks ago that i'd comment your work, but now that i've finally got off my lazy arse to write one for you, i find you've been gone for 33days and stupid ES isn't allowing me to submit one. it would be great if you could maybe log in just long enough so i can write you something. i'd feel better.
oh, and messg my page when you do coz i'll no doubt forget to check up on you.
sorry it's taken a while for me to thank you for the comment you left on my poem. i very much appreciate your kind words. i shall return the favour and comment one of your submissions tomorrow - i have some spare time in the evening.
Thanks for the grammar help. I'm actually fond of repetition, that's why I had the '79 paired with the '69. Mainly due to the 1969 song by Iggy and The Stooges. ^-^ And the sudden breaks were on purpose and with purpose as well. Again in reference to Iggy. There's a lot of references to The Stooges in there. But in the song Raw Power, there's a slight break in the end with just instruments then he breaks in and goes nuts singing/screaming "Raw power!" a bunch of times. I tried to kind of mimic that effect. *shrug*
I'm glad you liked it though!