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     Wounds of Time
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     Your Hiding Heart
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     Foam on my hot chocolate
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     Catch Me If You Can - Villanelle
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     Catch Me If You Can
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     Conversation - Sonnet
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     Phantom Heartache - Rewrite 2
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     Phantom Heartache - Ballad
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     Oh, to be your lap dog
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     Phantom Heartache (rewrite of "There are tear
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     Driving Home on a Snowy Night
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     Look to the Sky (revised)
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    Hey, thanks for the comment on New Found Friendship. I would like to put the music metaphor into the first line, I just haven't found the right word yet. Still searching!

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    | Posted on 2007-06-05 05:27:03 | by tulip - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for your post on LYSOL TRIUMPHANT. I know it had a lot of mistakes, I wrote it just for fun, but thanks for pointing out some of the stuff that didn't make sense or needed to be fixed! It helped me improve it and I didn't realize some of the mistakes until you pointed them out. Thanks!
    | Posted on 2007-06-04 20:15:57 | by dancer-of-words - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the comment on Limited Freedom. Do you think I should just erase what I have in the middle and start over with something else that would fit it and make it flow better?

    ~Piper
    | Posted on 2007-05-25 16:04:00 | by PiperH - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the comment on "Enamored with Decrepitation." Yeah, I like the way the "dark paintings" line helped to make that stanza work with the pattern, but I also agree that the "tingles running down your spine" line is too long. However, I really liked that description, so I'll have to find a way to shorten it. Or, I might just leave it. haha, either way, your review was appreciated.

    -Clarisse
    | Posted on 2007-05-24 18:54:38 | by JustClarisse. - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for your comment on 'Antipathy'. This was not one of my best pieces, but it held a lot of emotion. I wrote exactly what I was feeling at the time. I tend to use a lot of metaphors. I like to make people think a bit. I have actually tried to write poetry about love, happiness and the like, but it seems I write best when in worse moods. Go figure. (^_^) I was joking about it the other day saying, "If I ever wanted to be an accomplished writer, I would have to make my life a living hell." It is rather sad, but pretty funny all the same.

    Your Beautiful Nightmare,
    Lilithe Amara Aislin
    | Posted on 2007-05-24 08:22:42 | by Lilithe_Aislin - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for your feedback on "Tercet". It's actually about three women in a polyamorous relationship. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment, though. Much appreciated.

    ~drowning_queen
    | Posted on 2006-12-07 00:00:00 | by drowning_queen - [ Reply to This ] -



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