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Thank you for commenting on the revision I made of the White River part 2 - ACK I can't believe I did a to - too X.x (lol tutu- yes, I have a stupid sense of humor). I printed out the revision today to go through with my little marker and underline the things I don't like- someone told me I should read my dialogue out loud so I can hear where it sounds off. I think that is a great idea...I just hope no one else hears me :). Again thank you for pointing out my mistakes, it is really helpful. I'm glad you thought it was getting better-I wonder how many revisions until I think it is all right? - I just was noticing how Anna no longer sounds like Anna- she is just off Blech:(