--Elite Writer Alias: ghad Name: f dot ASL: 25/m/fl Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 1 Life Story: [ Ignore User ]
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thanks bud, you are so right. i love my fam and do anything for them, just the imediate ones.....my mother= the perfect woman....this was about my fiance...she is a mother been through alot,,,,so much it makes me quiver, she is with me. dont no why? but it is sooo wrong as far as ratings. but i know it is for me,,,,thanks for the reply,
Thank you for your comment on my story, well of that particular day of it. I appreciate the insight. However, at times I just don't find it that easy. I try; I'm usually unsuccessful.
Have you read the other days?
I appreciate the advise I suppose I sometimes forget that rhyming is not a neccesary requirement of peotry. I'd guess i am a little too logical at times. Or it might be because this poem in particular was kinda a first attempt after a long time when i was trying to get back on that horse.
Thanks for the advice on sick addiction. I appreciate constructive critism. i also want to say thank you for the personal advice. NIce to have someone listen.