Thank you for your commentary. I greatly appreciate it. I will definitely take your words into consideration because you're right about the "roosters are pimp" one. That took me only five mintues to do; I didn't really take time to think it through.
As for the second one, it was just an idea. I was sort of taking the word "pariah" and turning it into a poem. That isn't how I really feel at all.
Again, thank you for commenting. I enjoy input.
Hey, a while ago you posted a comment on one of my poems and I just wanted to say thanks. It's kind of funny seeing as it was posted so long ago and now that the future is here, your comment actually makes much more sense. Again, thank you.
hahahaha, it may not have been the best thing to do but it sounds like it solved the problem ironically enough that's what I'm doing. I plan to take the next two weeks away from them and just ignore it.