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    Thank you for your comments on "God and you and I." Ironic? Maybe, but if these are answers they are strictly personal, no universal approach here. If the poem was thought provoking, what more can one ask? I appreciate you taking the time to read and to comment. Thanks again.

    Phil
    | Posted on 2007-01-27 00:41:25 | by phil askew - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for the comment on "Allure". I enjoyed what you had to say and I think you are right. Beauty is this strange far off notion that always seems to shift just when you were starting to think that you are a little bit beautiful. So as it stands no one really looks at themselves in the way that other people see them and it causes this intense kind of desperation. I want to see myself as others see me and not as what society sees of me.
    | Posted on 2006-12-12 00:00:00 | by Briannan - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for the comment on "Allure". I enjoyed what you had to say and I think you are right. Beauty is this strange far off notion that always seems to shift just when you were starting to think that you are a little bit beautiful. So as it stands no one really looks at themselves in the way that other people see them and it causes this intense kind of desperation. I want to see myself as others see me and not as what society sees of me.
    | Posted on 2006-12-12 00:00:00 | by Briannan - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    You're welcome. I truly enjoy your posts so I try to read them as close to post date as possible. I try to give most stuff that I read thoughtful and first impression comments. Thank you for allowing me to read your work.
    Briannan
    | Posted on 2006-12-06 00:00:00 | by Briannan - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Sorry it took me so long, but thanks for the comment.
    | Posted on 2006-11-14 00:00:00 | by Liv2LoveThePain - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thank you for the time you took to review "frag mented" & the kind encouragment you provided.

    take care,

    Sarah
    | Posted on 2006-09-26 00:00:00 | by vohomegirl - [ Reply to This ] -



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