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    Hello there Ben!!!
    It's been ages it seems... I am back in the program, and will be back in L.A. this summer. Planning on attending some meetings, so let me know which ones u go to, I would love to see u again. I am trying to get in touch with Patricia Waldo, but can't seem to find her or her number, and tell her I am doing the Steps again. I was sentenced to 3 months rehab for possesion of pot and paraphenalia in conservative FL, so I am in San Diego right now doing the "time". I am becoming much more responsible here, God works in mysterious ways, indeed. Miss u and am thinking of u. My number is 310-717-6510, gimme a call anytime and tell me what u've been up to. Much love, Shalini Bridges
    | Posted on 2010-03-22 13:23:06 | by sbridges - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    hey I d just like to thank you for the excellent feedback you left me on "heart" and "narcassistic sorrow".As for the you were latter I am very flattered that you enjoyed it and your comment summed up everything I wanted to accomplish,you were spot on!

    But with "heart" I should apologies for perhaps mis-leading people.In the poem it is the heart speaking,not my heart or me speaking from the heart but a heart itself.I tried to humanize it to such an extent that the heart is saying what its nature was as if it was a person.

    But I also left it so that you may be fooled into thinking the heart is not at all a heart and have the reader give their opinion of that person.

    I hope that mechanic worked because your feedback was very interesting in that case.

    Anyway thanks once again and sorry for the long explanation,Ive told everyone who commented on the piece what my idea was.

    I appreciate your time:-)

    -Craig
    | Posted on 2007-06-05 18:33:25 | by Raphael - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    welcome to Elite Skills
    | Posted on 2007-06-01 22:22:05 | by littlepoet - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thank you for answering my post and welcome to Elite skills
    | Posted on 2007-06-01 22:15:19 | by littlepoet - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for your nitpickingon My Heart Is Not My Own, even if it was loquacious. It's exactly the advice I needed.

    When I wrote it, I wasn't sure it was about myself or someone else. It could easily apply to myself, and now that you think it would be better this way, I'm going to try and improve it in this manner.

    Many thanks
    | Posted on 2007-05-31 09:05:36 | by Fifi - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Glad I could help. Thanks for your comment too. I think I'm going to try and retool that piece a bit; see if I can fix it up a little.
    | Posted on 2007-05-30 20:42:52 | by alexanderharm - [ Reply to This ] -



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