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    Thanks for the comment on my post. And I beg to differ. Based on the work you've written, I don't believe you hate poetry in general, just the meandering, crappy stuff.

    Take care
    Bill
    | Posted on 2007-03-31 09:27:53 | by rws - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey honus, thanks for your comment on "slur." I'm glad you liked; very appreciated.
    | Posted on 2007-03-28 17:40:20 | by wool raincoat - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks a lot for your comment. Way to praise my work. Made me really feel good about myself:)

    Thanks!

    ~flora~
    | Posted on 2007-03-27 03:13:04 | by blankscreen - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey, I had absolutely no idea there was a novel called "Dandelion Wine" and I've never even heard of that author which makes me feel very ignorant - lol - I'm a big litrature lover and I read a lot, but mainly really old stuff.

    Thanks for the comment, though, I appreciate you taking the time. Was my poem overly similar to the content of the novel? I will have to try to find a copy of that book I guess.

    But I assure you I didn't know about it, 'cause if I did I never would have copied anything. I'm working on getting published, and have my own self-published book available, so I know the importance of being original, and would never plagarise.

    Thanks for letting me know about that book, I'll have to look into it and see how similar my poem is to it so I know whether or not to include it into my published works.

    Cheers and God bless,

    ~Mandi~
    | Posted on 2007-03-27 02:23:46 | by Mandi Gayle - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for the comment. At first I wondered how you got that out of that poem, ( not that that's bad, by any means. that's a great message and I'm glad you pulled it out of that mess of ideas) but after a little consideration I see what you mean, though I'm too tired to explain why, and what, and how.

    Anyways, I see the character (and those around her) in a different light, now. Plus, I'm in awe of how people look at different facets of the same thing and takes away different meanings, and why they view one facet instead of another, and whether they have a choice over that, and and and too many questions with answers
    that just taper off into silence...
    | Posted on 2007-03-27 02:15:10 | by lukewarm - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Haha! But then again, so is the word superfluous itself.

    -Mandolin
    | Posted on 2006-11-26 00:00:00 | by Mandolin - [ Reply to This ] -



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