--Elite Writer Alias: hybridsongwrite Name: Shawn Peterson ASL: 20 / M / MN, USA Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Website ] Blog:[ Blog ] Days Away: 19 Life Story: music [ Ignore User ]
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Journal: multi song idea -------------------------------------------
Mood: The Usual
I feel the storm on the rise
The storm in my mind
Even when you look in my eyes
You think I am fine
I’m good with the lies
I left myself behind
To live in a perfect disguise
Of promises and lies
It could have been different
I could have been somebody
Something better than this
It could have been different
I could have been careful
I could’ve been better than this
Trade the truth in for hate
I know I have disgraced
What’s left of my name’s sake
Is slowly being erased
Who am I to taint
What’s left in the grey
With these ever-growing mistakes
The past fades away
It could have been different
I could have been somebody
Something better than this
It could have been different
I could have felt something
I could’ve been better than this
Trade the truth in for a lie
Just to survive
I’ve sold my soul
I gave it my life
Every word that I wrote
Every line that I broke
With every thing that I said
I can’t get it out of my head
Ecstasy in retreat
I deserve this defeat
I have accomplished the feat
Of being a no one
I could have been someone
Something so much better than this
Their suspicious eyes
Are focused on the prize
But I’m dirty and weak
I’m empty inside
Every word that I spoke
Every last shred of hope
It all went up in flames
I know I’m the one whose to blame
Ecstasy in retreat
I deserve this defeat
I have accomplished the feat
Of being a no one
I could have been someone
Something so much better than this
I don’t know why I don’t feel
Anything when you reach out and touch me
Maybe it’s a dream, nothing’s real
Why do you insist that you want to fuck me
What is it you see
I know it’s not me
Inside I am dying
I spent so much trying…
For something that wasn’t meant to be
For something that wasn’t meant for me
For something that wasn’t meant to be
For something that wasn’t meant for me
I don’t know why I feel hate
For someone that I swore my life to
Insisting on giving you the blame
And swearing that I have the right to
Feel bitterness for this
Someone else that you kissed
Before you felt anything
Before you spread your wings
For something that wasn’t meant to be
For something that wasn’t meant for me
For something that wasn’t meant to be
For something that wasn’t meant for me
Run far away
Run to a safe place
I’m on a downward spiral
And I can’t escape….
Cold, sweet metal
And a finger ready to please
When I pull the last rose petal
I’ll grab tight and I’ll squeeze
Maybe the everlasting laughter
Will finally cease
When they see me after
The weight of the world brings me to my knees
This is what it’s come down to
This is such a great price
A bitter-sweet, final farewell
I’ll see you in the afterlife
It’s all over
Can you hear when I yell
That promised me heaven
But I’m burning in hell
If I had known this
I would have continued living my life
Cause hell is as bitter
As what I fell asleep to each night
Well, I'm not sure why I couldn't comment on the page of the poem I wanted to so I'll post it here. For "Reporting After School to Room 69" I absolutely LOVED it! Sure I'm a girl and I shouldn't enjoy dirty perversions like that, but who doesn't. One of the many greats I've found so far. Thanks for the stimulating read.
Beautiful, yet Corrupted
Dominique
Thanks for the comment and I Know there were some misspelled word but I fixed them and you I have seen fight club but that's not were I got it from, I got it from a game called FinalFantasy X when they had I fihgt U yevan.
I you havn'et play the game You should.
Shawn,
Thanks for the comment on Addiction. the repitition of the word is hard to describe other than it's more of a background vocal.
The music is already there kind of dark, blues meets Godsmack with a driving pulse like beet.
One of the real drawbacks to posting lyrics for me is that all of mine have music, but I gennerally don't record it for publication much beyond friends. I generally don't have the time to devote to it that it truly needs to have the professional polish that I want before posting it as a song.
Dude you're the only one who took the time to comment on blocked, so thank you so much.
I'm so glad that you read it, because it is a lyric in a way. I'm suffering from writers block and that just came out when I was playing some random chords on guitar. I've got a sweet melody for it, and the rhythm is more like half rap singing. Think paramore and misery business.
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