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    Alias: hybridsongwrite
    Name: Shawn Peterson
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    Nothing Secret, my music project, is getting set to take off


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    everything i've ever written happened in like ten minutes to fit the melody and theme of songs. i just post them for the purpose of organization. trying to write a poem is like 'trying' to walk. everybody can do it, and it's been done a thousand times before. so everything is going to be cliché and nothing will ever be original. but i will say i was shocked and offended by your blantant use of child pornography in that coat hanger abortion-abortion rant.

    | Posted on 2009-02-24 05:25:30 | by vanhokinshtyl - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    It was very kind of you to comment on "Folk Song", because i never really took a serious shot at a song before, i think one or two writes since has come out similar.

    anyway, thank you for commenting i do truly appreciate every comment and the person behind them taking the time to do it!
    | Posted on 2008-12-16 04:24:07 | by The Wolverine - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Its a writing forum,not a place to pull [censored] shock tactics

    If you want to highlight abortion that way,do it somewhere else,

    do it in your actual poem and let that be that,

    Jesus...

    its [censored] disgusting,

    I could overload my page with decapitation videos and illegal porn and skinned animals and whatever else there bloody is thats wrong in the world

    But I dont think anyone needs to do that to get a message across

    Maybe Im overeacting because Im appalled,but I come on elite skills to read poems,not see pictures of dead babys

    It undermines your poem,your poem is crap full stop when you put it under something like that,you cant compete with that kind of horror,so why bother to even write it???

    Im disgusted...

    I cant even make an argument or comment properly its so offensive

    -Craig

    | Posted on 2008-12-04 18:31:02 | by Raphael - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Well, I'm not sure why I couldn't comment on the page of the poem I wanted to so I'll post it here. For "Reporting After School to Room 69" I absolutely LOVED it! Sure I'm a girl and I shouldn't enjoy dirty perversions like that, but who doesn't. One of the many greats I've found so far. Thanks for the stimulating read.
    Beautiful, yet Corrupted
    Dominique
    | Posted on 2008-09-27 03:53:32 | by DearlyDeparted - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the comment and I Know there were some misspelled word but I fixed them and you I have seen fight club but that's not were I got it from, I got it from a game called FinalFantasy X when they had I fihgt U yevan.
    I you havn'et play the game You should.

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    | Posted on 2008-09-15 17:34:16 | by shadow of death - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for commenting on Facing the Fantasy. I write for challenge quite frequently, and this was written especially for one. Sharon
    | Posted on 2008-08-11 03:17:46 | by Peggy Paris - [ Reply to This ] -



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