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Name: B. Moore
ASL: 23/M/NC
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17 Years 1.7 Quote:
"carpe diem et carpe noctum"


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Thank you so much for your comment. I appreciated the interesting religious interpretation. It was actually not intended that way, but as I look more at it I can see exactly why you would read it like that.

A third level that nobody catches is that Faith is the middle name of the girl that I had in my mind when I wrote this. So I play with that quite a bit. It's fun. Glad you enjoyed it :)
| Posted on 2010-12-02 02:40:49 | by Zabriel - [ Reply to This ] -
  
I knew something was wrong with that poem and you nailed it! No, it wasn't deliberate, and you're right, it reads stilted. Too much like a list maybe. Thank you. I'll be getting to a rewrite now...
| Posted on 2009-10-07 10:09:36 | by AlyRose - [ Reply to This ] -
  
It's in that poem. I changed it to:

Pain,
Despair,
And weed for all!

It's a comment at the bottom.
| Posted on 2007-03-13 16:32:33 | by Magic Dragon - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Actually I did turn it into a poem. Read MornSweetSong's "How to write good poetry". I used it in my comment. the first time I turned a comment into a poem. Tell me what you think about it if you like.

Peace,
Love,
And weed for all!
| Posted on 2007-02-28 18:15:40 | by Magic Dragon - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Thanks for the comment on 'Remember the Light', but . . . Not to be rude or anything, I'm really grateful for your comment but . . .

. . . Uh . . .

Do I know you? I've never seen you comment on my works before, so . . . o-0;;
| Posted on 2007-02-27 18:02:48 | by Maki Kyomada - [ Reply to This ] -



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