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    Mood: The Usual
      
    I'm drawing closer and closer. He cannot run forever. One day, he and I will be one.


    ...Created 2011-04-25 18:46:37     [ View Past Journals ]

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    Featured: Infinite Bypass

     Mr. Butler's Harmony
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    ::Love : Class : Prose :
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    ::Longing : Class : Poetry :
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     Where the Truth Lies
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     Interview With The Sky
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     Starving is for Jesus
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    hi there

    as i said...it was whimsical piece playing on all the clichés and previous lines that came before...like the line from Hamlet..."brevity is the soul of wit"

    the movie "what dreams may come"

    i was just being satirical with a hint of seriousness...but the play was on the months...and the sayings..

    no reason to go ballistic...i appreciate what comments come...and if i do ever decide to turn the poem serious..i will take away the months and see what happens...

    anyway...have a good one.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-05-16 16:14:55 | by jacoberin - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    well, good vomit face now that i look at it again!
    | Posted on 2011-05-16 09:41:01 | by jacoberin - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    equals more than ?

    a little confused as to whether you liked the piece or not...

    but thanks for the look.


    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-05-14 17:40:22 | by jacoberin - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Well, I don't know about all that (exception) stuff being ummmm sarcasm or what. But... well, I don't know about all that. We're not exactly... I don't know what you are, but you're decidedly (and repeatedly hammering in) that we are in no way FRIENDS or anything, so I'm not sure what angle you're coming at me with that boxing glove right now...

    http://youtu.be/QnXjISlKLuE

    Not that it applies, but it kinda applies to everything I do...
    | Posted on 2011-05-09 19:15:25 | by Runes - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks for the comments on "Melancholy..."

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-04-09 15:36:23 | by jacoberin - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    and i enjoyed your comments on "tattered roses" very much..

    what an interesting perspective...

    thank you, ishoes...

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-04-09 15:35:11 | by jacoberin - [ Reply to This ] -



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