--Elite Writer Alias: idlewriter Name: Stacey M ASL: 23/f/missouri Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 4007 Life Story: coming and going [ Ignore User ]
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I could now comment on The Connection which indeed is complex and thought provoking, but it strikes me as a Sybil type psycho therapy scene. It is clear that there is a sort of dichotomy of the mind. You know the incoherent conversation could, well, leave a reader to believe that the person is schidzophrenic; however, it appears that the therapist was using hypnosis as a therapeutic means to understand the persons condition and the depth thereof.
Creatively interesting, how this tends to lean toward psychosis. It is kind of horrifying and sad to see a person suffer severe trauma and be so significantly affected by trauma. I graduated with a B.S. in Psychology and Education. The dialogue is cleverly written and well thought out. I would definitely like to pass this on. It provoked my mind to ponder deeply about the thin line between sanity and insanity. Great...no Excellently written!
Looong Thyme! Read 'The Connection' by Clyde's 'little' idlewriter! WoW! Wanted to comment but wasn't given that option. Your mind has really blossomed. Because of the intro, I was able to feel your thoughts and direction... Glad you left us hanging, more powerful that way. The write really motives me. Sending my love.
Outta Korea and in Kenora now. Finally packed by bag away and hung up my passport. Only traveling I want now is to get back home!