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    "puppies. breathing. cherry pie
    pick me up, I want to die
    make me want to feel once more
    take me to the sunny shore
    build a castle on my head
    shells and crabs and feeling dread
    slap my face, cut my hair
    gulping, gulping, there is no air
    I float away on jellyfish
    stinging, swaying, burning wish
    sinking down, blue depths below
    torture, grief you'll never know
    leave me here, I changed my mind
    my wretched body you'll never find"

    An adept use of language to describe the "almost zone" of wanting/despising help. At least that's how the winds are blowing on my shore.
    | Posted on 2015-11-15 19:40:45 | by rws - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for taking the time to read Behind Clenched Teeth.
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