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Where have all the smart people gone? Where are the talented writers? Where are the critics that have something meaningful to say?

And where in the world are those that use proper grammar and spell correctly (or at least use spell check)?

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Tighten your chastity belt
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Hi Desirae,

I just noticed that you made a coment on my poem. I think I posted this right before I stopped posting for awhile. I didn't even realize I had any comments on this one, until you pointed that out. It's very encouraging to read your kind words! Thank you very much!

annie

| Posted on 2008-07-09 23:04:57 | by annie0888 - [ Reply to This ] -

Oooh! And a favorites edition. I'm going to read your poems and gve them a few comments. Definatley check out my MySpace page too, it has a lot of my poems from this site as songs.

| Posted on 2008-07-04 23:55:00 | by NoMartyr - [ Reply to This ] -

Thanks for your comments on Ivy Cling. It is a song already go to www.myspace.com/effyourgod to hear it, it's the first one. Maybe when you hear the song you'll get why the word placing in question is the way it is.

| Posted on 2008-07-04 23:26:30 | by NoMartyr - [ Reply to This ] -

I will stop, but I will also question the value of posting on a website whose purpose is critical appraisal when you don't want any.

All the best anyway.

| Posted on 2008-07-04 19:01:25 | by Civilian - [ Reply to This ] -

lol! nah... i meant attackist...... promise. i invent words all the time which works fine except when im teaching english in ethiopia haha! but thanx

| Posted on 2008-07-04 17:05:51 | by Someones Epiphany - [ Reply to This ] -

Thanks for sharing your thoughts- I agree poetry can function as a medium for 'getting things out', but I think that you might be selling it (and yourself) a bit short. As well as venting, poetry can share ideas, inform and convince, make us think and challenge our perceptions, and a host of other things.

Allow yourself to be more ambitious in your writing- for me the best poetry will say something evocative and original in a clear and insightful way.

| Posted on 2008-07-03 07:28:28 | by Civilian - [ Reply to This ] -

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.