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Favorites: 25 Forum Posts: 27 Shoutbox Posts: 3 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 4710 D 12.9 Years 1.29 Decades 157 Months 672.86 Weeks 4.710000e+8 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: Grace only exists to be fallen from.
I just noticed that you made a coment on my poem. I think I posted this right before I stopped posting for awhile. I didn't even realize I had any comments on this one, until you pointed that out. It's very encouraging to read your kind words! Thank you very much!
Thanks for your comments on Ivy Cling. It is a song already go to www.myspace.com/effyourgod to hear it, it's the first one. Maybe when you hear the song you'll get why the word placing in question is the way it is.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts- I agree poetry can function as a medium for 'getting things out', but I think that you might be selling it (and yourself) a bit short. As well as venting, poetry can share ideas, inform and convince, make us think and challenge our perceptions, and a host of other things.
Allow yourself to be more ambitious in your writing- for me the best poetry will say something evocative and original in a clear and insightful way.