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thank you for commenting on my poem. its much appreciated. michelle

| Posted on 2007-01-20 17:56:39 | by whirl - [ Reply to This ] -

thx for ur comments

| Posted on 2007-01-18 22:28:38 | by girly101 - [ Reply to This ] -

Thanks for commenting on my poem. Yes...I totally understand how it doesn't sound right. I kind of wanted it to seem in that one line, that his home life was aweful and everyone disliked him. But I understand why it doesn't sound right. I'm not quite done it yet, and I'm glad for your input. I'm kind of stuck on it right now, but...I'll get to it eventually.

| Posted on 2007-01-18 20:31:02 | by blue_pixie_dust - [ Reply to This ] -

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