--Elite Writer Alias: johnroth Name: John Roth ASL: 24 Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 540 Life Story: Summarize. [ Ignore User ]
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I read your forum post... and I'll tell you why you haven't had any reviews: it's pretty damn long (I'd suggest trying to break it up in 3 or 4 parts) and people mostly review poetry here.
www.writerscafe.org has plenty of story-writers who might be able to help you out a bit better.
Thanx for commenting on heal :)
Its actually the chorus for a song im writing, the last two lines are longer to match the tune.. maybe i should put that down in the description ... ^_^ Thank you for pointing it out ^_^
It wasn't until after I wrote it that I noticed it sounded like a poem. Kinda strange I thought... but no I haven't tried to put it in verse yet. I think I'm gonna try it though.
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